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One More Reason You Should Click Join

booksbylyncote.com Posted on April 10, 2011 by Lyn CoteApril 10, 2011

Have you ever looked in the upper right hand corner of this page?

If you look there, you’ll see

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I have over five hundred members of my egroup but I’d like to double that with your help.

First of all, what’s an egroup? It’s a private loop for people who are interested in the same things.
Joining my egroup means that you will receive a monthly note from me. In that note, I communicate about
  • what I’m writing now
  • what I’m reading
  • what I’m doing
  • contests available either here or on other sites

If you aren’t a member already, I hope you’ll join and invite a friend. MEGA May is about to begin. On Tuesday, I’ll be posting about my annual celebration of strong women which lasts the whole Mother’s Day month. There will be special giveaways and fun that month as usual!

This week I sent a message to my egroup letting them know about many free Christian novels available on ereaders like the Kindle and asked members to reply. Twenty-four responded. Since I hadn’t ever asked my egroup members to respond to a message, I wasn’t too surprised that so few did.

Especially since I hadn’t let them know I that I was going to choose one of the responders to receive a copy of my latest book, Daddy in the Making.

The winner is Pat Sanchez!

During the remainder of April and throughout May, if you join my egroup or if you’re already a member, you can persuade another reader of my books or blog to join (Make sure they email me and give your name. Click Contact above.), I’ll enter both names into another drawing to win my latest book and one from the past. How’s that?

Finally, here’s a link to a drawing to win a Kindle, which is one of those new electronic readers, which a few of us have. (I don’t yet. Maybe I’ll get one for Mother’s Day!) http://wildfireapp.com/website/6/contests/108175

This drawing is by Joanna Weaver to publicize her book Lazarus Awakening. I don’t know Joanna and haven’t read the book but I think she came up with a good way to call attention to it, don’t you?

Anyway, I hope you’ll join my egroup or invite someone to join. And swell my membership. I’ve been kind of stuck around 500 for several years now. Thanks for reading my books, reading my blog, leaving occasional comments.

Do you remember the old days when you had to write a letter to an author, wait months to hear or never hear–because the letter fell behind something at the publisher’s office? Sounds ancient, doesn’t it? Aren’t you glad someone invented blogs, Facebook, etc.? –Lyn
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Chapter Eleven Scene 3 La Belle Christiane

booksbylyncote.com Posted on April 8, 2011 by Lyn CoteApril 4, 2011

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La Belle Christiane

2011 copyright by Lyn Cote

All rights reserved

Chapter Eleven, Scene 3

The light of the morning filtered through Christiane’s closed eyes. Sighing deeply in her half-sleep, she rolled onto her back and opened her eyes sleepily. Above her was a high white coved ceiling, an unfamiliar one. Where am I?

Memories of the road block popped into her mind. Her eyes flew wide. In one quick motion Christiane stood up. Just as suddenly the top of her skull throbbed with a surged. Like an ocean wave the pain flooded her, making her nauseated and weak. Moaning, she staggered back and clutched a bed post.

“Your head hurts?” a quiet male voice asked.

Christiane looked up slightly, but the agony above her brow made her mute.

“Lay back down,” the voice instructed her.

“Where?” she gasped. A stranger came over, lifted her effortlessly onto the high feather bed and swept up a quilt from the floor covered her. “Now lie still. Maybe the pain will subside,” he continued matter-of-factly.

With closed eyes, she lay still, feeling the pain ever so slightly begin to ebb. She heard logs tumbling onto the fire; then the curtain rings scraped as they were opened wide to the side of the bed that was nearest the hearth.

“Is your pain easing any?” he asked.

“Yes,” Christiane managed to whisper. Through tiny slits between her eyelashes, she saw him, standing across from her by the bed, wearing a British officer’s uniform. The sight jolted her head and the increased pain nauseated her. “Who are you?” And even as she whispered it, she knew who he was–the young captain at the little fort on the Ottawa River, Captain Eastham. She closed her eyes again, unable to believe what they told her.

“The question is, ma’am, who are you?”

“Where am I?”

He looked at her intently. “On my bed,” he said wryly.

“Where?” Her nausea was becoming worse and she was having trouble drawing up enough energy even to speak.

“Philadelphia. And this particular part of Philadelphia is one of the senior officers’ quarters,” the major spoke as a teacher to a rather slow pupil. “Yesterday afternoon you were apprehended at a roadblock as a suspicious person. You were brought here for questioning. I am the officer in charge of that questioning. From now on I will ask the questions and you will answer them.”

Christiane barely nodded, hardly able to see, the morning light stabbing her eyes. Her headache was overpowering her, but she was certain of what she’d seen. This was the captain. His brown hair was pulled back into a tight club, as she remembered, but now it was touched with gray at the temples. But his piercing blue eyes were the same.

He doesn’t remember me.

This truth cut her like razors. He had played such a big part in her life. For the past three years, he had appeared in her dreams. How could he not remember her? She pressed her fist against her heart, to stop the ache there. Unable to stop herself, she moaned.

“Are you feeling sick to your stomach?” he asked, sounding concern.

She shook her head slightly. She hadn’t known this kind of heart-pain since Jacob had turned away from her that day she found him in New York City. She squeezed her eyelids tight and forced down the tears that were a hair’s breadth away.

The incident at the roadblock popped into her mind. Why hadn’t she stayed safely at the Richardsons? She was in real peril here. The British officers quarters, dear heaven. The torment of her head threatened to overcome her.  Yet she must gather her wits. This time the captain was her enemy, not her ally. She would have to fight this feeling of drowning in the pain and disappointment and try to think of a plausible story to explain her masquerade. If not, she might very well spend the duration of the war imprisoned. Seconds passed, but she found she could not think of a single false, but believable explanation.

As if reading her thoughts, he said, “Have you come up with a good story yet?”

“No,” she said helplessly.

Unexpectedly he laughed and the sound struck her head like a blow. “Then, ma’am, tell me the truth.”

“I’ll have to,” she said softly, still looking away. She wanted to cry out, “It is I, Captain! Don’t you remember me? You helped choose my first husband. I have never forgotten you. Why have you forgotten me?” She sucked in a deep breath to choke back the weeping that was in her throat.

“Very well. Begin please.”

Since she was in too much pain to lie effectively, she decided to tell the truth, but as little as she could. “What do you want to know?”

“Your name?”

“Mrs. Christiane Belmond.” Thinking about Canada had prompted her to use her former name. She almost corrected herself, but stopped. It might be better to use her former name. Christiane Belmond had no connections to the Washingtons. But would her married name jog his memory?

“Where is your husband?”

“I am a widow.” Carefully she relaxed her body and her voice to give no evidence of her fear. Nonetheless, her head felt ready to split into two.

“Mrs. Belmond, why were you travelling disguised as a boy?”

“It is safer.”

He paused to think. “I see. A woman would cause a stir travelling alone. But the question is: why were you alone?”

“I had no one to travel with.” Miserable, she eased back further into the feather pillows and pulled the quilt higher.

“Then why not stay where you were?”

She thought a moment. “I could tell you why, but it is quite personal and I would prefer not to. It has nothing to do with politics,” she said honestly.

He thought about this some more. “Personal, you say?”

“Yes, very.”

“Where were you going?’

“To visit friends,” she answered faintly. Where was her own clothing?  She would need it to flee this house as soon as she could dress and–stand.

“Where is your home?”

“I don’t really have a permanent residence right now,” Christiane admitted.

“You’re a vagrant then?”

“Not really.” She knew that vagrancy was against the law. “I have worked as a lady’s companion. I am merely between positions.”

“A lady’s companion?” the major sounded doubtful.

Christiane said, “Yes,” as firmly as she could.

“Somehow I don’t see you as a lady’s companion–a gentleman’s companion, yes. A lady’s, no.”

“You are too personal, sir,” Christiane said as hotly as she was able. Only the fear of more pain stopped her from sitting upright.

What will the major say to that?

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Author Missy Tippens & When a Mom Feels Like a Failure

booksbylyncote.com Posted on April 7, 2011 by Lyn CoteApril 7, 2011

My guest today is Missy Tippens who has an interesting new heroine. Here’s Missy:

“I’d love to share a little about A Family for Faith, my new release from Love Inspired, with you today! And I’ll be giving away a copy in a drawing from among those who comment. Just let me know you’d like to enter and leave contact info.
Faith, the heroine of my story, is a single mom in a strained relationship with her son, who lives with his father. When the boy was in middle school, he started hanging with a bad crowd and getting into trouble. When he asked to go live with his dad, she had no choice but to try it. And the boy flourished there. In the book, he’s in high school and doing well. But she still feels like a failure. She’s dealing with guilt about how she handled the past. Trying her best to be supportive and be there for him whenever she can. Hoping to heal their relationship when he comes to visit for the summer.

Sometimes it’s difficult being a parent. We make decisions and then doubt ourselves. We blame ourselves. We wish we had a do-over. I based this character on a friend of mine who was devastated after her children chose to live with her ex-husband. She’s a good mom but didn’t feel that way at the time. Yet she remained firmly in their lives and has kept a good relationship with them even to this day. I consider her a strong woman who persevered through the pain.

A Family for Faith By Missy Tippens
When Faith Hagin sees widower cop Gabe Reynolds every day in her coffee shop, she can’t help but feel for the struggling single dad. She’s raised a teenager of her own—and sadly, knows what not to do. But thanks to his matchmaking preteen daughter, Chelsea, the whole town’s praying for Gabe to find a wife!
Even though Faith thinks she’s content being just friends, spending time with him and Chelsea starts to feel like a fresh start at having a family. And their love may be the answer to everyone’s prayers.

Bio: Missy Tippens is a pastor’s wife and mom of three who lives near Atlanta. After ten years of pursuing her dream, she made her first sale of a full-length novel to Love Inspired in 2007. She still pinches herself to see if it really happened! Her novels have been finalists in the American Christian Fiction Writers Book of the Year Contest, the Gayle Wilson Award of Excellence and the Bookseller’s Best Award. Her current novel from Love Inspired is on shelves now. The next, A House Full of Hope, will be out in February 2012.

For more info, drop by http://www.MissyTippens.com and http://lifewithmissy.blogspot.com/ To read an except, click here.

When Missy said “Sometimes it’s difficult being a parent,” I nearly choked on my coffee. Sometimes parenting seems beyond our powers. When I held my newborn in my arms, the fact that I’d be a mother for the rest of my life never occurred to me. But perhaps that’s for the best.  🙂 What has been the most challenging age or aspect of parenting for you? And what has helped you as a parent?–Lyn
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Chapter Eleven Scene 2 La Belle Christiane

booksbylyncote.com Posted on April 6, 2011 by Lyn CoteApril 2, 2011

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La Belle Christiane

2011 copyright by Lyn Cote

All rights reserved

Chapter Eleven Scene 2

“The town jail is full up and we don’t have no proper military jail, my lord,” the young private said anxiously. “I’m sorry to have to bother you this late in the evenin’, sir.”

“Quite all right, private,” the major answered perfunctorily. “You say the prisoner was brought in this afternoon?”

“Yes, sir, seems he acted suspicious-like at a roadblock east of here.”

The major nodded absently. They were approaching the stables near the major’s quarters. He was wondering how he had gotten this duty tonight. Normally a captain or lieutenant would handle interrogating such an unimportant prisoner. Usually these prisoners were just young boys, full of the rebellion, no threat, just young and cocky. He would scare the hell out of this one and send him home to his mother.

At least, it was something different. How he hated going into winter quarters. It reminded him too much of Canada. The major entered the stable, followed closely by the private, who was carrying a lantern. The horses snorted and pranced a bit at their intrusion.

“There, there, good fellows,” the major said soothingly. He stroked a head here and there as he went down the center aisle between the stalls. They reached a small door at the end of the aisle. The private fumbled and jangled the keys in the dim light and then the old lock grated open. The private unlocked the door and the officer stepped in. A slight form lay still on the scattered hay.

“Here, boy, wake up,” the major said as he gently nudged the form with the toe of his boot. Only a soft moan answered him. “Private, was he hurt, do you know?”

“Sorry, sir, I don’t know. I didn’t see him brought in.”

The major motioned for the lantern as he bent one knee into the straw. Carefully he turned the body toward him and looked at the closed face. “There are bruises on his chin and forehead.”

“Yes, sir.”

“If he has been unconscious since this afternoon, it might be serious.”

“Yes, sir.”

The officer took the limp wrist to check for a heartbeat. “His pulse is very slow. And his skin is cool, very cool.”

“He’s only a prisoner, sir.”

“I know, but he’s just a boy. Look his cheek is as smooth as a girl’s.” Some mother is waiting up for this cub. “Private, go to the rear parlor. Dr. Justin is playing chess there. Bring him here. Tell him it’s urgent.”

The major stood, waiting in the darkness. He hoped the lad was not hurt badly. It would be pleasant to think that someone would be able to go home tonight. The minutes ticked by. He stomped his cold feet in the chill room. Another soft moan answered him. The nearby church bell rang ten times plus three-quarters. A few horses shuffled and neighed. Then the quiet closed in around him again and he longed to be back in his room, sleeping or reading by the fire. At last he heard the stable door opening and the footsteps he had waited for.

“Major, you called me away from a warm fire and a hot chess game for this cold barn.” the doctor’s brusque voice exploded in the confined area.

“Duty calls us all,” the major answered wryly.

“Which means if the conscientious major must freeze, so must I?”

“Something like that.”

“Well, what is it?” The doctor motioned for the lantern to come closer.

“You tell me.” The officer moved the lantern over the silent form atop the straw.

The doctor knelt by his patient. “How long has he been unconscious?”

“Possibly since this afternoon.”

“Don’t you know for certain?”

“No,” the major said, suddenly shivering.

“Wonderful.” The doctor tried the pulse. “Weak. Very weak.”

“He seems extremely cool to the touch.”

“Thinking of taking up medicine?” the doctor asked idly, then more seriously, “It isn’t good. Unconscious for this long in an unheated room. I don’t know whether it’s the initial impact or the cold that is the culprit.”

“What should we do?”

“We need to raise his body temperature. If the cold is the culprit, he should regain consciousness.” The doctor rubbed his own hands together.

“If not?” the major asked.

“If not, then it’s the serious blow to the head. Either way if we leave him out here all night, he might die or, at least, suffer severe frostbite.”

“Then let’s take him inside. What would be the quickest way to raise his body heat?”

” I suggest he be wrapped in blankets and set him by the fire.”

The major frowned, trying to think of where to take the lad, where his kindness would cause the least notice. “Let’s get him up to my room.” Having said this, he stooped and scooped up the boy’s limp form and then slung him on his broad left shoulder. “Private, give the good doctor the lantern. We won’t need you anymore tonight. Return to your quarters.”

The private saluted happily and was gone.

“All I can say is this boy is lucky to have drawn you. I can’t see another officer inviting a colonial lad to their room,” the doctor said, hurrying along.

The major gave no answer. They used the kitchen entrance and went up the back stairs and met no one till they entered the major’s large room on the second landing. The major’s man was waiting by the fire. “Alfred, we need to get this young lad warmed up. He’s been unconscious too long.”

“I see, my lord,” was all the seasoned valet said.

“Well, let’s get this over with,” the doctor urged, “my chess partner may have made his move and be waiting.”

“Not your partner. I saw whom you were playing. It takes him an hour for each move.”

The major deftly pulled off the lad’s fox tail cap, releasing two long braids.  A few hairpins pinged on the hardwood floor.

The valet, standing beside them, gave a muted gasp. Several minutes of silence passed while the men absorbed the shock. The unknown woman gave another small moan and visibly shivered.

“Let’s get her wrapped in those blankets and beside the fire right away,” the doctor directly in a low voice. The two men carefully lifted her and carried her to the fire, the only light in the room. Gently they lowered her beside the warmth.

“Well, we’ll see now if it was the cold that kept her from coming to,” the doctor continued to speak quietly.

As if to answer him, the woman moved slightly and moaned repeatedly. Then her eyelids began to flutter. Her eyes stared at them unfocused, and then they seemed to light on the major’s face. The stranger moaned again, seemingly unable to talk.

“Is she regaining consciousness?” the major asked.

“The warmth is helping. It’s good you acted so quickly. She might have died out there if left till morning. Wonder what she’s doing dressed like a boy?”

The men did not speak again as they chafed her hands and then her feet, bringing the blood back to them. Alfred waited a few steps from them. One hand resting against a solid maple post, the doctor stood at the foot of the bed, draped with thick bed curtains. The major was opposite him, holding the red fox cap, its tail touching the floor. Against the wall of the fire-lit room, their long shadows flickered. For a long while no one spoke.

At last the doctor broke the mesmerized silence. “Well, this is interesting, isn’t it?”

“Quite,” the major replied succinctly.

“Who do you think she is? More importantly why was she masquerading as a young boy?”

“I have no idea.” The major set the hat on back of a nearby upholstered armchair. The firelight illumined the gold thread in the fabric.

“What do you intend to do?”

“Wait until morning and question her,” the major said.

“That should be interesting.” The doctor sounded amused.

“Perhaps.” The major leaned against the carved mantel.

“Well, I’ll be getting back to my chess game. This story should liven it up.”

The major held up one hand. “Don’t.”

“What?”

“This may be very complicated and delicate. No one else should know about it till my interrogation is complete and I’ve reported to Colonel Mensing.”

“Mensing? Intelligence, you mean? A woman spy? That’s unheard of.”

“Not unheard of. Merely unusual.” The major took another step closer to the occupant of the  bed.

“Oh, well, I’ll still get to embellish the story tomorrow afternoon as one of the three eyewitnesses. Good night.”

Alfred escorted the doctor the short way to the door and closed it behind him. For a few moments the major and his man stood, surveying the situation.

“My lord, will you be wanting your night shirt?” Alfred inquired deferentially.

“No,” his lord answered, still distracted.

“Extra blankets?”

“Yes,” he answered a bit gruffly. “Then go to bed. It’s late.”

“Yes, my lord.” Alfred disappeared through a door to his bed in the dressing room, returned with blankets and then left with a quiet good night.

The major stood many more minutes, just staring down at the sleeping woman. The church bell chimed twelve o’clock. Suddenly his fatigue was crushing. He quickly undressed by the fire. He laid his uniform on the bed. Frost glistened on the windows in the firelight. He tossed a few logs from the wood box onto the low flames. Alfred must have been upset not to have attended to it before leaving for the night.

Again he stood at the hearth, gazing at the woman wrapped in quilts. In the darkened room, he couldn’t see her features. But she was young and her hair long and thick. He knew why the doctor had thought the situation–a woman in his room–humorous. He was well aware that the other officers thought him strange because he was not sampling every available strumpet in Philadelphia and its surrounding counties as they were. He had his reasons for behaving differently and they were his own business.

But still he knew if he left his quarters just because this woman was in his bed, he would be a laughingstock. And he was not willing to put himself in that extreme position. He glanced over at the solitary armchair by the hearth, fine for reading, but not for sleeping. However, he couldn’t bring himself to sleep in his bed with a stranger, a woman in his room on the floor by the fire. Disgruntled, he wrapped himself in the extra blankets and settled himself in the chair. Just as he began to relax, he was disturbed by a new thought. Scrambling up and over the icy floor, he locked the door from the inside.

Back by the fire, he put the key in his pocket. There. She would not be leaving without giving him a thorough explanation. He took the chair again. He fell asleep with a scowl on his face.

Well, what do you think about this?


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Author Robin Lee Hatcher & The Story Jar

booksbylyncote.com Posted on April 5, 2011 by Lyn CoteApril 4, 2011

My guest today is Author Robin Lee Hatcher and she has something just—

In time for Mother’s Day giving…

THE STORY JAR

by Robin Lee Hatcher and Deborah Bedford

A lovely novel of three women, their stories threaded together through the concept of

The Story Jar…

The jar itself is most unusual—not utilized in the ordinary way for canning or storing food, but as a collection point for memories. Some mementos in the jar—hair ribbons, a ring, a medallion–are sorrowful, others tender, some bittersweet. But all those memories eventually bring their owners to a place of hope and redemption in spite of circumstances that seemingly have no solution.

THE STORY BEHIND THE STORY JAR

by Robin Lee Hatcher

In September 1998, I received a story jar as a thank you gift after speaking at a writers’ conference in Nebraska. The small mason jar, the lid covered with a pretty handkerchief, was filled with many odds and ends – a Gerber baby spoon, an empty thread spindle, a colorful pen, several buttons, a tiny American flag, an earring, and more.

The idea behind this gift was a simple one. When a writer can’t think of anything to write, she stares at one of the objects in the jar and lets her imagination play. Who did that belong to? How hold was he? What sort of person was he? What does the object represent in his life?

Writers love to play the “what if” game. It’s how most stories come into being. Something piques their interest, they start asking questions, and a book is born.

A week after receiving my story jar, I attended a retreat with several writer friends of mine, Deborah Bedford included. On the flight home, I told Deborah about the jar. The next thing you know (after all, what better thing is there for writers to do on a plane than play “what if”?), we began brainstorming what would ultimately become The Story Jar. We decided very quickly that we wanted this to be a book that celebrates motherhood, that encourages mothers, that recognizes how much they should be loved and honored.

The Story Jar was first published by Multnomah in 2000, but eventually went out of print. Thus Deborah and I are delighted that Hendrickson wanted to bring it out in a new, revised version because we believe these stories can inspire others, just as it did this reader back in 2001:

“I am an avid book reader and have read thousands of books––maybe more––since the age of 5. I can honestly say that [The Story Jar] has touched me more than any other I have read. I cried, I laughed, and I relearned things that I had forgotten long ago as well as realizing things I never knew. Thank you for sharing your stories with your readers. They are truly inspiring. I plan on giving it to all the ‘mothers’ in my life for Mother’s Day.”

You don’t have to be a writer to want a story jar. It can be a family’s way of preserving memories. Consider having a family get-together where everybody brings an item to go into the jar, and as it drops in, they tell what it means to them, what it symbolizes. We can learn something new about our loved ones when we hear their memories in their own words. Or do what my church did a number of years ago to create a memory for a retiring pastor. Inspired by The Story Jar, members of the congregation brought items to the retirement dinner to put into a story jar or they simply wrote their memories on a piece of paper to go into the jar. It was our way of saying thanks to a man and wife for all of the years they’d given in God’s service.

A story jar can be a tool for remembering all the wonderful things God has done in our own lives. As Mrs. Halley said, not all of God’s miracles are in the Bible. He is still performing them today in countless ways today, changing lives, healing hearts.

In the grip of His grace,

Robin Lee Hatcher

he Story Jar on Amazon:

http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/1598566652/novelistrobinlee

The Story Jar on ChristianBook:

http://www.christianbook.com/Christian/Books/product?event=AFF&p=1138486&item_no=566659

Robin Lee Hatcher

http://www.robinleehatcher.com

Deborah Bedford

http://www.deborahbedfordbooks.com/

Sounds like a touching book. Thanks, Robin.

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Chapter Eleven Scene 1 La Belle Christiane

booksbylyncote.com Posted on April 4, 2011 by Lyn CoteMarch 26, 2011

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La Belle Christiane

2011 copyright by Lyn Cote

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Chapter Eleven Scene 1

The common room of the inn was almost empty. Over-tired from her first night and day on the road, Christiane had overslept. Most of the other travelers must have left around dawn, she thought as she ate her rich porridge and thick slab of bread. She had been apprehensive about spending the night at the inn, but a few moments inside the door and she had been re-assured. It was a prosperous commercial inn, not one to encourage riotous behavior. Sipping from her pewter mug of creamy, sweet tea, she felt almost wealthy. Last year she had begged her way through New Jersey. This year she had the few pence it took to purchase bed and board. But she sat as close to the warming fire as was safe. She dreaded going out in the cold. The late November sun shone brightly through the few windows, but the wind, whining through the leafless trees, sounded willful. From what she’d overheard in the inn, the Continental Army had moved to northeast of Philadelphia.

Finally Christiane rose and walked as masculinely as she could to the innkeeper’s thin wife. Her account settled, she and Nancy, both well-fed and rested, turned onto the road to Philadelphia. Christiane hummed as she reviewed the previous days. All had gone smoothly. The few people she had encountered had accepted her as the callow youth she wanted to appear.

After winning the battles of Brandywine and Germantown, the British had taken control of New Jersey and eastern Pennsylvania and had taken Philadelphia as their headquarters. She was quite aware that she was riding through enemy-controlled territory. She just as soon have by-passed the big city, but all roads led there so she had no choice but to go to the city and then find her way to Valley Forge. She’d overheard the other travelers talking about General Washington setting up his winter headquarters at Valley Forge. The Forge’s position was a good one, easy to defend and close to the enemy, but unfortunately for the Continental Army, the English had already picked the area clean of provisions.

But Christiane felt that the enemy control of Philadelphia would work in her favor. She would tell Henry that friends of the Richardsons had brought her as far as Philadelphia, but since, Christiane had not wanted to put Henry or any other officer in danger, she had merely traveled the short distance from Philadelphia to the Forge by herself. She permitted herself to smile a bit smugly.

She was certain also that in a few weeks she would persuade Henry to marry her and send for Jean Claude or perhaps she would leave her son with the Richardsons and visit them often. Everything in her life would fall into place at last. She would have the kind of husband she needed and her son would be re-united with her.

A few hours down the road, she boarded a ferry at the Rappahanock River. The memory of crossing ice-filled rivers the year before as Washington’s army ran for its life flashed vividly through her mind. Once again this year the Revolutionary forces had been pushed back by the invading army. But she had no doubts about the men she had worked with. They would not give up the fight till their independence had been won.

On the other side of the river, Nancy plodded on down the lonely winding road with its thick growth of leafless trees, crowding it on both sides. Tired, Christiane’s mind wandered.

“Halt!” the voice boomed like a cannon through her pre-occupied mind. Old Nancy shied. Christiane tightened her grip on the harness a second too late and off she went. Landing on her bottom, she gave an “oof.” The two English soldiers laughed at her discomfort. It was a roadblock. She had been stopped at a few before, but at those she had been seen them ahead and also had been shielded from close scrutiny by a group of other travelers.

Her mind raced. A lone woman, she had no illusions about what men were capable of. Another complication occurred to her suddenly. If they discovered her masquerade, they might think her a spy. Sympathizers were imprisoned and spies were hung. Her terror escalated, but she worked to keep her wits about her. She was just a young lad, travelling on family business. Slowly she retrieved the dragging harness and stroked the jittery mare’s neck.

“Lad,” the older of the two soldiers barked, “don’t h’ever think of ji’ning the calv’ry. You won’t neever qualeefy.” The two roared again at their own humor. Inwardly Christiane was relieved at their acceptance of her ruse. “State yer business,” the same one demanded.

“Jest going to Philadelphy,” Christiane mumbled, squinting up at him.

“What fer?”

“Family matter,” she mumbled again, watching the two Englishmen studying her. They looked bored and chilled.

“Yer saddlebags is awful full,” the talkative one observed.

“Just some things for my sis,” she improvised quickly.

“You have a sister?” the younger soldier piped in.

The older one laughed.

“You have a sister in Philadelphy?” the young man persisted.

“Aye,” she grunted in her best boy-style.

“Pretty?”

“No.”

The older one laughed again. “George ‘ere don’t care if she’s pretty or not. Think she’d be interested in ‘im?”

“She’s married,” Christiane grunted again.

“George wouldn’t ‘old that against ‘er. Would you, George?”

George just grinned in response.

The conversation disgusted Christiane and she wanted to be off. She threw the reins back up to Nancy’s back and made ready to hoist herself up.

“‘Ere, lad, you ‘ain’t been given permission to mount up yit!” the older one shouted. “Nobody ‘ain’t neever taught you ‘ow to treat your betters! You taker your ‘at off when you speaks to a King’s soldier!” Both men crowded close to her.

Memories of the night in the kitchen crowded closer. She panicked. Fumbled at her belt for her knife. She heard a shout and felt a blow to her skull. Blackness.

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Pain. She was aware of pain so severe she could not bear to open her eyes. Someone was lifting her and then carrying her like a sack of meal. Her head pounded. A door creaked and she felt herself being thrown down. The smell of stale hay. Darkness.
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We have two winners!

booksbylyncote.com Posted on April 3, 2011 by Lyn CoteApril 3, 2011

This week two of my guests, Margaret Daley and Vickie McDonough, offered book giveaway drawings to those who left comments.

The winner of Margaret Daley’s Trail of Lies is April A Renn at tarenn98(at)yahoo(dot)com

And the winner of Vickie McDonough’s Finally a Bride is  Linda St Myers at lstmyers(at)cinci(dot)rr(dot)com

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Chapter Ten Scene 5 La Belle Christiane

booksbylyncote.com Posted on April 1, 2011 by Lyn CoteMarch 26, 2011

La Belle Christiane

2011 copyright by Lyn Cote

All rights reserved

Chapter Ten, Scene 5

Dressed in her long, heavy flannel gown and stocking feet, she paced the room back and forth. The wind rattled the window and the candle’s shadows danced to each gust. The minutes accumulated into hours. Her head ached and her eyes were dry with fatigue. Still she paced. Finally she paused by the darkened window. By pressing her face close to the glass, she could see outside. The moon was nearly full and the stars were brilliantly crystal, shining coldly down on her. Resting her head against the icy window pane, she pondered what she should do.

Suddenly she knew clearly what she wanted to do. She wanted to leave. But if she followed both the General’s and Henry’s orders, it would take, at least, a week or two for a letter to reach headquarters and then more for a carriage to be sent for her. How could she force Jean Claude to leave with her? How could she leave the Richardsons completely alone? At this the tears hovered closely again. Fiercely she pushed them back.

How could she explain her true feelings to the Richardsons? They would not understand her desire for a different life. How could she face them, knowing that their dream of having her and her son close by in the way they had assumed was doomed?

She knew also that if they were the kind of people that would have met this news with arguments and anger, they would have made it easier for her. She could have felt righteous about asserting her own will. But she knew that they would not try to stop her. They were too good, too kind to hurt. She could not face them. She needed to talk this over with Henry.

Through the window her glance encountered the barn below. An overwhelming urge to be safely back at headquarters in her accustomed role came over her. She had her mare, Nancy. She could leave tonight. Her own audacity shocked her. She could not go alone, she argued sensibly with herself. But her distraught mind shrieked, I want to go now!

An old idea came to her. She moved over to her bed and knelt beside it. Silently she tugged out her old saddlebags. From them, she pulled out Jon’s buckskins. She had not been able to part with them. They had stayed with her–all she had left of Rumsveld and Jacob. Now she was desperate enough to try a masquerade. She couldn’t wait for Henry to come for her. The longer she stayed, the harder it would be to leave with or without Jean Claude.

Quickly she shed her feminine attire and examined the worn frontier outfit. If she were to succeed in her disguise, she would have to take pains to mask her womanly form. Eating regularly had filled her curves out nicely. Even the long fringed jacket would not hide them. Soon she was wrapping a light shawl from a point just under her arms to the top of her thighs. It gave her a uniformly thick trunk and held her breasts flat. Then she added the cotton flannel shirt and buckskin breeches and jacket. She plaited her hair into two tight braids which she pinned flat against the back of her head and drew Jon’s red, fox-tail hat.

Now she must leave a note for Sarah and Josiah. She couldn’t bear to cause them worry by just disappearing. She sat at the bedside table, quill in hand, waiting for inspiration. She must write something soon before the low candle burned out completely.

Dear Sarah Anne and Josiah,

I am sorry to leave you like this, but….

I have my reasons. Please do not worry. I will return

as soon as possible. Tell Jean Claude I love him and will return.

Christiane

She laid the note on her pillow. Carefully she gathered up a few items and put them in the saddlebags for the journey and her brown dress, underclothing, stockings, shoes. She would have to have an outfit to change into once this charade was over. After glancing around the room, she quietly left. She paused before the old couple’s bedroom door. If only Jean Claude was not sleeping in their room, she could see him once more.

Silently she walked down to the end of the hall and down the steps. From the pantry, she took a half loaf of brown bread and filled her water skin from the covered pitcher there. Then she stood before the side door.

A shiver of fear and cold sliced through her. Could she walk out into that chilling darkness, mount Nancy, and leave? Before fear could stop her, she blew out the candle and stepped out into the night. As she marched briskly to the barn and harnessed Nancy, she shivered in earnest. Then she walked the horse down the moonlit lane and she did not look back.

Whoa! Christiane, what are you doing? The phrase above in red–she calls it fear, But I would call it caution.  I think it is fear that is driving her. Acting rashly out of fear can end badly. Fear can cause people to do and say things that they shouldn’t. But what exactly is Christiane is afraid of?

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Vickie McDonough & Her Mom’s Cinderella Life

booksbylyncote.com Posted on March 31, 2011 by Lyn CoteMarch 27, 2011

My guest today is Author Vickie McDonough who shares very frankly about her “Cinderella” mother and how God changed a heart.  I think there’s more than one Cinderella in this story. Vickie has also offered a copy of her latest book Finally a Bride. Leave a comment with your email using (at) and (dot) to be entered in the drawing. Here’s Vickie:

“There was a time when I couldn’t stand to be around my mother. In fact, I all but quit going over to visit. My mom has always had myriad problems. Her mother was accidentally killed when Mom was only two years old, then my granddad remarried shortly after that, and he married a woman who hated kids—until she had one of her own. Mom literally grew up a Cinderella life, with a step-brother who was highly favored, while she was made to work and received little love and attention. It’s no wonder she had problems.

My dad, on the other hand, was the youngest of ten kids and had parents who lived to be in their nineties. He lovingly cared for them much of his life. He was the nurturer in our family, and the one I was closest to.

When Dad died suddenly six years ago, I didn’t know what I was going to do with Mom. She believed she had environmental allergies—among a host of other illnesses—and hadn’t left her home in 20 years. I’m not kidding. Dad had done everything for her—and now everything fell on me. And I wasn’t happy about it. And I let God know that.

But, I did what I had to do. I couldn’t abandon my mom, no matter how I felt. At first, I went over daily to do things she couldn’t do for herself, then we started bringing her over for Sunday dinner and for the afternoon. Long story short, God gradually did a big work in my heart. Mom and I pretty close now. Thanks to getting her meds stabilized, she’s much easier to be around. We still argue at times, but God has healed things between us.

The biggest work was done in my heart. I’ve never been known as a compassionate person, so taking care of a senior citizen has been an adjustment. I now if God had taken Mom first, I’d have suffered much guilt over how I treated her, but in His mercy, He gave us this time to heal. And you might like to know, lately I’ve gotten mom to go eat in a restaurant and go in a store with me. I just wish my dad could see her now. He would be so proud.”

Yes, Vickie, your dad would be proud and I think that your heavenly Father is proud of you too. “Love one another as I have loved you” isn’t about “feeling” love but “doing” love. In loving your mother with your actions, you healed. So both you and your mother had a Cinderella Happily Ever After Ending.

Finally a Bride, her book that releases April 1st, is the third book in her Texas Boardinghouse Brides series and is the book she’s offering to giveaway. So leave a comment. Do you have a story where loving actions prompted love?

For more info about Vickie and her books, drop by www.vickiemcdonough.com



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Chapter Ten Scene 4 La Belle Christiane

booksbylyncote.com Posted on March 30, 2011 by Lyn CoteApril 2, 2011

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La Belle Christiane

2011 copyright by Lyn Cote

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Chapter Ten, Scene 4

The woman turned to him and motioned him to join them. “I wasn’t, husband, but perhaps now would be a good time?” She waited till he nodded. “I was just telling this dear daughter, that is how we think of thee, dearest Christiane, as the daughter we never had…What was I saying?”

“Thee was telling her?” Josiah prompted.

“Oh, yes, how forgetful I am. Anyway I was telling her how much joy she and her son have brought into our lives. Dearest Christiane, thy son is precious beyond measure to us. This year has been the most wonderful for us in the past thirty.”

“It is thirty years since our youngest son passed on,” Josiah commented quietly. “I was thirty-two when he left us. My fields are rented out. We are just two old putterers now.” He stopped to smile. “But, thank the Lord, we are still in good health and we have managed well with your son this year, I think.”

Christiane waited, letting all they had said sink in. He looked directly into Christiane’s eyes. “But at our ages good health can leave very quickly. Since we love thy son, we wanted him to be provided for in case anything happened to us before he reached maturity. So we had a will drawn up.”

Josiah began to speak more briskly, “Jean Claude has been designated as our sole heir. Thee, of course, would be the guardian of his assets, till he comes of age. But in case all three of us die, God forbid, and leave him an orphan, we chose guardians from our closest and dearest friends. Everything has been written, signed, sealed, and should be undisputed in any fair court.” He beamed in a satisfied way and reached out and took one of her hands away from Sarah Anne.

“And daughter Christiane,” Sarah spoke up, “Jean Claude will not only inherit this farm, but my family’s land also. Our joy is complete now that thee has come home for good. Again I apologize for my impertinence this afternoon. There are many good and prosperous farmers to choose thy next husband from. Christiane, my dear, take thy time and choose the best.”

“Yes, Daughter, we want thee to have the best. Always,” Josiah chimed in. The two sat smiling at her, each holding one of her hands. Christiane looked from one to the other, completely dumbfounded. Their announcement and assurance that she had come home to stay were so at variance with her plans that she could think of nothing to say, nothing that would not be hurtful.

“Your generosity amazes me,” she said at last.

“Oh, Christiane, we had no one else to leave it to,” Josiah said modestly.

“And besides, my dear, a stepfather looks more kindly at a stepson who has his own inheritance. There is less friction,” Sarah said.

“Sarah, I don’t think any of the men we know would be unkind to our Jean Claude,” Josiah dissented.

“Yes, dear, but she may not choose to marry a Friend,” Sarah replied. He nodded in return. In the face of all this, Christiane smiled as well as she was able.

“I think I’ll take a walk this afternoon,” she said. By now Christiane knew their after-dinner routine. Jean Claude would nap all afternoon. Josiah would sit by the window and read any paper at hand and then nap in the chair. Sarah would doze in her rocking chair by the fire. They would rest till Jean Claude came bounding down the stairs.

Christiane looked past them. Deep golden sunshine shone through the delicate curtains. “Just leave the dishes to soak and I will wash them when I return.” Sarah Anne tried to object. “Just leave them or I’ll be angry,” Christiane asserted. She went to the pegs by the door. Taking down her bonnet, gloves, and shawl, she let herself out quietly into the windy November day. The sun was deceiving. Its rays were only warm when one was standing directly in them. Christiane pulled the shawl more closely around and struck out briskly. She had to get away and think.

Far from the farmhouse down near the creek, she stopped finally. Leaning back against a thick, gnarled ancient oak, she positioned her feet in the crooks of its twisted and raised roots. The dried brown leaves above her rattled with each gust of wind and she began to think.

First of all, the Richardsons loved her and, most of all, loved her son. “I always knew that,” she whispered. They had made it clear that their home was hers when she had come to them last fall, but she had not realized that they would think she had come home to stay! She had thought almost nothing about their reaction to her leaving and talking Jean Claude with her. Her own callousness glistened coldly in front of her own eyes.

“But he’s my son! I didn’t mean to leave him with them for a whole year!” she said aloud. She caught hold of a low branch with both hands and gripped it painfully. The stabbing loneliness she had felt each night the year before without her son’s warm body cuddled up to hers washed over her in smothering waves as she struggled with the young branch.

But what can you give him? She let go of the branch and wiped away the tears that had come. The Richardsons had given him a good home, love, and all their material wealth. She was engaged to a gentleman, the son of a wealthy family, but what did that mean for Jean Claude? Henry would be responsible for her and her son, only when they were married, and that would not be till the war was over. What could she give her son now?

Christiane sat down on a prominent, gnarled root nearby. She had nothing to give her child except her love and the promise of a home. The Washingtons had made it clear that Christiane’s position was hers as long as she wanted it. She had not mentioned bringing Jean Claude back with her to either of them.

Perhaps she had not wanted to admit to herself that matters had not really changed. The same reasons that had forced her to leave him originally with the Richardsons, weren’t they still valid? The memory of shivering men, standing in line at Morristown waiting for smallpox vaccinations, flashed through her mind. How many children had died last winter, too? Christiane made a nest of her arms and rested her head in it.

To the Richardsons, the solution was simple. She should stay here and marry a farmer. Why couldn’t she accept that? She would marry again. Why couldn’t she marry a farmer and settle here?

But she knew she wanted more–a life filled with beautiful things: crystal goblets, silver tea sets, delicate bone china, satin gowns and lace camisoles, graceful staircases and symmetrical gardens. She wanted to be included in conversations with educated people, men who could turn a compliment into poetry, people who took an active part in making the future happen. In either station of life, there would be children to bear and duties to perform. But she wanted the elegance she had grown up with, not the hardship she had grown to expect.

But Jean Claude….her calm analysis broke down. Waves of strong, undefined emotion flooded her. Standing up, she         pressed herself back against the firm trunk as though trying to resist them. She wanted many things. She wanted the life Henry offered her. She wanted the Richardsons to be happy. Most importantly, she wanted her son, who had made it clear that he considered her the outsider, to accept her. But Jean Claude did not want to leave his home.

Finally she became aware of the sun setting. She must get back or they would worry and she might hurt herself, walking in the semi-dark. She turned abruptly and nearly tripped over another tree root. She walked quickly home over the frozen ground.

That evening was a blur. She could not hide her pre-occupation. There was a quiet supper and then she watched Jean Claude fall asleep in Sarah’s arms by the fire. Finally Christiane gathered him up and carried him to his bed. This was the only time she could hold her son–only when he was so soundly asleep that he did not know that they were her arms. On the previous nights, she had returned to spend a few fireside moments with the Richardsons, but tonight she turned to her room instead. How could she bear to hurt them?

end of scene 3

Later she heard their footsteps on the stairs and then a timid knock. “Christiane?” Sarah’s voice asked softly. Christiane rose from sitting on her bed and went to face them. Her pulse leaped erratically. She opened the door and tried to smile.

Josiah stood with his hand, resting on his wife’s shoulder. Sarah Anne held a candle. “Christiane, is something wrong?” the old woman asked sadly. Christiane shook her head.

“Is it the will?” Josiah asked huskily.

“No, I….No,” Christiane stammered again.

“We just wanted thee and Jean Claude to be safe and happy,” Sarah Anne offered.

“I know,” Christiane replied sincerely. Impulsively she hugged Sarah and then Josiah. “Good night,” she said, tears threatening. She could see that they wanted to ask more, but graciously they bid her good night and she watched the small light waver down the hall to their door.

As she undressed, Christiane left her candle flickering on her bedside table. Outwardly she moved methodically. Inside her heart continued to race. Images of her past and thoughts of her choices tumbled over each other in her brain.

So I think you’d agree that matters aren’t going as Christiane expected. What will she do? Decide to stay with Richardsons and pursue a simple life? Or ? What’s your prediction?

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