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Chapter Six, Scene 4 La Belle Christiane

booksbylyncote.com Posted on February 16, 2011 by Lyn CoteFebruary 15, 2011

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La Belle Christiane

Copyright 2011 by Lyn Cote

All rights reserved

Chapter Six Scene 4

“I don’t know, but you know boys. Bet he’s somewhere about,” the woman tried to sound encouraging. “I’ll send the word up ahead. You go back and spread the word that way.”

Soon the call of “Michael! Michael Main!” echoed up and down the length of the train.

Within an hour the wagonmaster was ready to press on, but Michael was not to be found anywhere among the many wagons. Two of the burly drivers came to confer with Tildy and Christiane about the lost child.

“We got to git on, don’t ye see?” the older man stated, not unkindly. “We got orders to git as far north as we kin as quick as we kin.”

“Shouldn’t let children run about,” the other muttered.

The first ignored this and pressed on to make his point. “I feel powerful bad about this, but we got to git on.”

If Tildy had had the strength, she would have been hysterical. Instead she merely sagged between the two women who supported her.

“I’ll go back and find him,” Christiane heard herself say. Everyone turned to look at her. She was not surprised. She had shocked herself.

“Ain’t safe for a woman to be travelin’ alone,” the old driver objected. Tildy said something unintelligible, but it, too, seemed an objection.

Christiane pulled her weary self together as well as she could. “I have travelled from Montreal to New York City alone. I believe I can make it half a day’s journey over and back. Besides I still have my hunting knife,” Christiane said as stoutly as she could manage.

She knew the agony her friend was feeling. Even knowing he was safe, she suffered was over being separated from Jean Claude. But Micheal he wasn’t safe. Dread filled her. Two armies were probably battling somewhere south, deserters roamed the countryside and it was cold enough to freeze a young lad to death before morning. Michael had to be found and as soon as possible and, no one else who could go, would. “Where are the wagons headed for? I’ll need to know where to meet up with you.”

“I ain’t supposed to say,” the old man said. “But, oh, what the hell, ye got to know. Come over here. I’ll tell ye.” He pulled her a few steps away from the others and whispered in her ear. “We’re headed to Morristown, New Jersey. Just ye stick to Princeton Road comin’ and goin’ as far as ye kin. All right?”

Shivering, Christiane nodded.

The old man gripped her shoulder as though giving her strength. “Good luck then.” He stepped back toward the crowd of women. “All right. Everybody git ready. We’ll be leaving right now.” The call went up and down the line as two women helped Tildy and William with their blankets onto a wagon.

“Don’t worry, Tildy. I’ll bring him back,” Christiane called as bravely as she could. Tildy pressed her hands together, making the sign that she would be praying. Christiane turned poor, tired Nancy and started back south over the wretched miles she had just spent a day accomplishing.

At first her fears made her alert to the subtle sounds, interrupting the midwinter night–Nancy’s hooves plodding, the hollow voices and farm animal noises near the occasional farms she passed, her own breathing. A summer’s night was literally alive with sound, but a winter’s night was deathly silent. The stars above were bright and sparkling. Christiane took as much comfort from their beauty as she could. The crisp and cold air fairly crackled around her muffled ears. Occasionally a gust of wind would rattle the leafless trees and startle her. The mud evidenced the dropping temperature. It had been moist and sticky all day. Now it was frozen.

Her initial alertness waned before the onslaught of her own weariness and the chill. Many times she caught herself dozing. She was surprised that she was able to stand leaning against Nancy while sleeping. From time to time Nancy would also stop as though taking a brief nap herself. Christiane did not urge her on. The mare had been walking and sometimes carrying her all day and probably would be all night. Finally the cold would prompt the mare and she would start again of her own accord.

On Nancy’s back, Christiane awoke once again with a jerk. Nancy, too, was taking one of her rests. How many hours she had been on the horse she did not know, but she knew she was saddle-weary. She slid off and stood, leaning against the warm body of the horse. Had she ever been warm? The surroundings appeared somewhat familiar even in the sparse moonlight and Christiane was sure she had not strayed from Princeton Road.

Maybe she should start calling his name once in a while, now that she was nearer where he had left them. Her shouts roused only Nancy, who began plodding again. Christiane decided to walk beside her to start her circulation going again. So she walked beside the mare alternately clapping her mittened hands together and calling out Michael’s name.

This went on for more than an hour. Never had Christiane felt more isolated. The silence around her was crushing; then she thought she heard something. She stopped Nancy and stood like a statue. She heard it again. It was another voice. “Michael!” she called out, hoping against hope. “Michael?”

Then she heard the answer from a distance. “Mrs. Kruger!” She dropped the reins and started running. Then she could see him about a hundred yards ahead of her on the frozen, rutted road. When she reached him, she held him close to her. Waves of relief washed over her. Jean Claude was safe with the Richardsons and Michael was here with her. She looked down at him, still unable to speak. His face streamed with tears and he was gasping for breath. She just held him close and hugged him till they both began to breath normally again.

“Michael, why did you leave us?”

His words tumbled out of his mouth. “I wanted to see a battle. But I got scared. I saw some deserters, English ones, and I hid from them. Then I went on farther and I heard cannon. That scared me. Then I remembered Father told me to stay with Mother and take care of her. And I knew he’d be angered if he saw me. And it was dark and I was scared.”

Instinctively Christiane knew that this was not the moment for a reprimand and besides she was just too tired. Nancy had caught up with them and stood patiently beside her. “Come, Michael. Let’s get back to your mother.” In their accustomed manner they mounted and turned back north.  At dawn they would stop at the nearest farm and beg for food and warmth. The worst was over. A day or two and they would be re-united with Tildy.

More hours came and went. Michael and she dozed off and on and Nancy plodded on, stopping periodically. Dawn still seemed to be years away.

Christiane awoke with a start. She looked down into the face of a Hessian and screamed.

“Down!” he bellowed at her in broken English. “Gib mir dein horse!”

Christiane kicked out with her right leg, almost knocking him off balance. With a curse, he lunged forward. But Christiane was ready for him. As he struck her thigh with his bayonet, she slashed him with her hunting knife. The blade flayed him across his throat. Blood shot out, spraying both of them. He stabbed her once more in the thigh; then he loosed the reins and fell to the ground in a heap. The frightened horse took off. Christiane gripped the mane to keep astride. Weeping aloud, Michael clutched her waist. The horse galloped only a short distance. Though terrified, Nancy was too tired to run for long. When the horse stopped and stood heaving from the exertion, Christiane ordered weakly, “Michael, get down and hand me up the reins.”

“Are you all right?”

“Michael, get down and hand me up the reins,” Christiane repeated as she pried his arms loose.

As he handed up the reins, he stared at Christiane’s leg. “Mrs. Kruger, you’re bleeding.”

“I know, Michael. Now get back up. Hurry.” Her icy leg burned with pain. Christiane looked around. Not a house in sight, but, at least, the gray of predawn was lightening around them. “Michael, we’re going to find help,” she said evenly.

From deep inside a fit of shivering welled up in her. “Hold on tight, Michael.” With this she urged Nancy on. All the while she was aware of the sickly sensation of her own warm blood coursing down her frostbitten leg and filling her moccasin to over-flowing.

The minutes seemed endless and still no house appeared. Christiane halted the exhausted mare. She cut two of the long strings on Jon’s buckskin jacket and tied them together. Then she looped it around her injured thigh, making a primitive tourniquet. When she straightened up, stars exploded before her eyes and she slumped forward against the mare’s neck.

“Mrs. Kruger! Mrs. Kruger!” Michael called hysterically. He tried to reach around for the reins. Finally he caught them with his fingertips. Then he nudged Nancy with his heels.

Another mile and half down the road he spotted a lane off to the left. He kicked in at Nancy’s sides and urged her to go, but to no avail. The mare had walked all day and all night and she was done for. The unconscious Christiane slid slowly from the mare’s back, landing on the frozen ground with a muffled thud. Michael jumped down and ran up the lane.

At the end of the long lane, a path in the snow led to a modest, white farmhouse, flanked by two barns. Michael ran directly to the side door and began pounding and yelling. Two large dogs came charging around from one of the barns, but Michael ignored their barking and continued beating the door.

At last the door was flung open by a half-dressed man. “What’s the matter?” he yelled sleepily as the dogs quieted.

“She’s dying! She’s dying!” Michael screamed at the man. “You’ve got to help me! She’s dying!”
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Author Victoria Bylin & Living With Mistakes

booksbylyncote.com Posted on February 15, 2011 by Lyn CoteJanuary 31, 2011

My guest today is Author Victoria Bylin and she discusses Living with Mistakes. Here’s Victoria:

“I want to thank Lyn for inviting me to participate in her blog. It’s a joy to talk about strong women, and it’s particularly fitting for The Outlaw’s Return. The heroine, Mary Larue, is a woman with a secret. She’s also a brand new Christian. When a man from her past walks into her life–the outlaw who once left her pregnant and unmarried–Mary is faced with a challenge. That challenge isn’t forgiving the man who hurt her. She forgave J.T. Quinn the day she become a Christian. Mary’s challenge is living with her mistakes.

She’s a lot like the Samaritan woman in the Bible, the one who meets Christ at the well. When Jesus asks the Samaritan women if she has a husband, she rightly says that she’s never been married. They talk for a bit, and she leaves with her sins forgiven. Mary Larue has had a similar experience.

That’s what I love most about this heroine. She’s been forgiven and she knows it. More than anything, she wants to make good choices. The problem is reconciling her present with the past, especially where it concerns outlaw J.T. Quinn. She’s attracted to J.T. but she doesn’t trust him. She’s terrified of losing her good name again, and she has an enemy who wants to manipulate her. No one in Denver knows that she was once with child. She wants to keep it that way, but above all else, she wants to honor God and the gift of a clean slate.

It takes courage to deal with the wreckage of the past. Mary finds that strength, and her faith grows as she steps up to an assortment of problems. I admire her!  It was pure pleasure to give this strong woman a happy ending that includes a family, hope and the man she’s always loved.  J.T. is a lucky man!”–Victoria

Thanks so much for being my guest, Victoria. And if you want to know more about her and her writing, drop by these sites:

Website:  www.victoriabylin.com
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Chapter Six Scene 3- La Belle Christiane

booksbylyncote.com Posted on February 14, 2011 by Lyn CoteFebruary 11, 2011

Remember is you’ve just discovered my free read, click the button above Archived Free Read to begin at the start.

La Belle Christiane

Copyright 2011 by Lyn Cote

All rights reserved

Chapter Six Scene 3

The troops and families were still camping separately, so Christiane decided to go to Jakob’s squad to ask about their own plans. Tomorrow, December 31, 1776, Jakob’s enlistment ended. In fact the majority of the soldiers would be free the next day. Plans were being shared all around in family camp as to who was going where and how. She had just reached Jakob’s squad when the striking blue-and-white uniforms of the officers appeared among the drab and muddy homespun and buckskin.

Looking up, Christiane recognized the general and at his elbow, Laurens. Quickly she looked down, hoping that she would not be noticed. Under everyday circumstances, her unkempt appearance was trying, but being seen by these two gentlemen struck her with acute embarrassment. She pulled her faithful quilt closer around her shoulders.

“Men!” Colonel Fish shouted. “The general would like to speak with you.”

As Washington stepped forward, a quiet respect showed in the mens’ stances and silence. “Men, I am glad of the opportunity to speak to you today on a matter of great importance. It has been a long, cold month.” Polite murmurs of agreement were heard. “I am not unmindful of the hardships that you have endured in the cause of the Revolution. Especially those of you with families here.” At this Christiane looked up, she found the general gazing directly at her. Mortified, she blushed, but lifted her chin gracefully. “I am certain all of you are familiar with Thomas Paine’s treatise, “Common Sense.” I would like to read you a few lines from his latest treatise, The Crisis because they so adequately reflect my own feelings.

“‘These are the times that try men’s souls. The summer soldier and the sunshine patriot will, in this crisis, shrink from the service of his country; but he that stands it now deserves the love and thanks of man and woman.'” Washington looked up. “That is what I am here to ask you. Will you stand with me? Many of you have enlistments that end tomorrow. I know well how it is to want to go home. Mt. Vernon is calling to me, but the voice of liberty constrains me. I cannot stand alone or move against the enemy without you. The Revolution–America–needs you.

“You have shown what you are capable of here at Trenton, but the war is not won. If you leave now before we can safely go into winter quarters, all may be lost. Will you re-enlist? If not for six months, at least, for six weeks? I cannot stress enough how much you are needed, every one of you. I am able to offer an extra ten dollar bounty to any man who will stay with us, at least, six more weeks. But more importantly, America will owe you her heartfelt gratitude. What do you say? Will any of you come forward?”

There was an awkward silence. Christiane knew these soldiers had come to respect deeply this man, their commander, but what he asked would cost them a great deal. Christiane felt the cross-current of emotions herself. Somehow she had not caught the significance of the effect of all the six-month enlistments ending while winter quarters still had not been entered.

And she was truly touched by his personal appeal. It was not something any European officer would have been gracious or humble enough to do. And his case was sound. How could a general, even a great one, fight a war alone? But spending January, the heart of winter, in tents and barns without proper clothing or provisions? Christiane was caught between her desire to finish what they had started and her private needs, her need to see her son again.

Jakob ended her quandary. “We stay. I sign up for six more weeks,” he stated loudly and firmly.

“Thank you, soldier. Please come up. I would like to shake your hand,” the general answered, sounding pleased. Jakob went forward and it was an indication of the regard he was held that many men followed him. Tom and Michael were among them.

Christiane was still caught between her conflicting emotions. She wanted to scream, “Stop!” but she could not. A part of her was proud of her husband’s resoluteness and courage. But six more weeks, how could she bear it?

“Mrs. Kruger?” a voice inquired beside her. She looked up into Lt. Colonel Laurens’ face.

“Lt. Colonel,” she greeted him. She was sincerely happy to see him, but unhappy to have him see her. Unconsciously she extended her hand, which he bowed over politely. Silently she wanted to slap herself. Once so long ago she had learned the manners of an aristocrat and now whenever she was confronted by a person of quality, she automatically reverted to them. Would she never learn?

“It is a pleasure to see you again, ma’am,” he replied.

“The pleasure is mine,” she returned patly. Trying to divert the conversation to him, she continued, “I’m sure you have been very busy of late.”

“Indeed, ma’am. The general has done quite a bit of correspondence, especially to Congress.”

“I heard that they have moved from Philadelphia to Baltimore,” Christiane continued in her best drawing-room style.

“Unfortunately, yes, though if our luck holds, they should be able to return soon.”

This comment was left without a reply as Christiane glanced over just a Jakob and the general reached them. Christiane had the sudden impulse to pick up her skirts and run. Wrapped in a dirty quilt in clothes she had not washed in over a month, the humiliation of this moment almost crushed her, but again her chin went up.

“Mrs. Kruger,” the general addressed her politely. “Your husband thanked me again for the service of that courier and I wished to thank you for your continued devotion to our cause.”

Christiane curtseyed formally. “The general is too kind,” she murmured. There was an awkward pause for she was too abashed to refute his compliment.

His eyes lingering on her face, the general broke the silence, “I wish we could chat longer, but I have two more regiments to visit this morning.”

“We understand, of course, general,” she responded almost regally and extended her hand again. Then they were gone. Turning to Jakob, she spoke quietly, “Are you sure? I–”

“I know, Liebschein. I know. But it is only six weeks. Then we go to Jean Claude right away.”

Christiane only nodded. Nothing could be done anyway. Tears rushed up in her eyes. Not wanting him to see them, she turned away.

But Jakob did not let her leave. From behind he embraced her, resting his chin on her right shoulder. “Thank you, Christiane. You never complain. I make it up to you.”

Christiane was weighted down with a crushing load of despair, but she hid it from him. She nodded and turned to press her cheek to his. “I love you, Jakob,” she whispered. “Always.”

“I love you also, my sweet Liebschein. I know you don’t want to be here. But you stay–”

“I am committed now, Jakob.”

“You mean it?”

She nodded. “You and General Washington cannot be wrong. I trust you too much.”

They kissed then. Jakob crushed her once again to him. Then Michael Main called to him. Christiane turned to leave, but Jakob could not let go of her hand. Lifting her palm, he kissed it with great care and respect. Finally she pulled a way and left him. A glance over her shoulder revealed him, staring after her, sadness in his eyes.

#

Less than a week later the women were roused before dawn by the wagonmasters. It was time to move again–north. Christiane was glad to hear the direction. Going north would only bring her closer to Jean Claude. On the other side of the coin, however, this meant that Jakob might be in danger again. The British were smarting over their defeat at Trenton. Maybe they were coming to demand their pound of flesh. This aspect was not wasted on young Michael as the women went through the routine of packing.

“Michael,” Tildy gasped, “I don’t want to hear any more about it! You cannot stay with your father! Battle or no–children are not permitted to remain with the troops.” Even little William looked exasperated with his brother, his expression said that even he knew it was a crack-brained idea.

“But–” the child tried one last time.

“Not a word, Michael. Not one word,” Tildy slammed the argument shut. Christiane could see that the exchange had sapped her friend’s last bit of strength. Christiane wordlessly helped Tildy onto her place on the familiar wagon. William climbed up beside her and Christiane covered them both with the blankets. There was no clamor anymore for places on the wagons. Walking helped keep toes from freezing. Christiane mounted Nancy and hoisted Michael, still disgruntled, up behind her.

The wagons began to roll. Grimly Christiane faced a day of walking and riding through the freezing wind. In spite of the cold that chilled her to her very core, the roads were still stiffly muddy in spots. This slowed their progress and made the day all the more miserable. When they stopped to make a midday meal and to rest the horses and oxen, Michael begged to be allowed to travel with his friend, David. Tildy finally gave in, saying it would compensate him for his earlier disappointment. He left quickly with a loud whoop.

Soon they were back on the road again and the frigid miles inched on. Finally it was time to rest again, but not for the night. The order came down the line that they were to continue on as long as the stock could carry on. Muttered retorts greeted this as the weary women huddled around the few fires. They sipped hot tea from warm mugs and gnawed at hard bread.

“Christiane, I’m sorry to ask you this, but would you go get Michael. I think he should sleep on the wagon with William and me. I would go, but…,” Tildy asked.

“Certainly,” Christiane cut in. “I’ll get him right now.” She worked her way up the line to the wagon that David’s family travelled beside. “Michael! Michael!” she called when she came near it.

“Michael? Did you expect to find him here?” David’s mother answered from her place at the fire.

Fear sparked in Christiane’s inside. “Didn’t he come to you at midday?”

“No,” the woman answered, “I haven’t seen him all day.”

Christiane just stared at her. “Where could he be?”

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Chapter Six Scene 2 La Belle Christiane

booksbylyncote.com Posted on February 11, 2011 by Lyn CoteFebruary 3, 2011

Remember if you’ve just discovered La Belle Christiane, click Archived Free Read above and start at the beginning.

La Belle Christiane

Copyrigth 2011 by Lyn Cote

All rights reserved

Chapter Six Scne 2

And what about Jean Claude? Did he remember her at all? In another month Jakob’s enlistment would end and she would see her son again. Would she last till then? The day of freezing rain had ended. A wind had swept the clouds from the sky. The stars glittered in brittle light without warmth above her. Tildy was coughing again. Christiane trembled as she banked the fire and then went inside the flapping canvas walls to lie down and warm her friend.

#

A few days passed and Christiane and Tildy sat miserably in their windbreak, wrapped in blankets, huddled by the fire. The two of them held mugs of steaming water. Without intending to, Christiane let out a downhearted sigh.

Tildy tried to smile. “Come now, Christiane. I’m sure the provisions will be better today.”

Christiane’s lips trembled with the cold and unshed tears. The men still had not been allowed to stay with their families. “Why can’t Jakob and Michael be with us?”

“They must be battle-ready. Have courage. I’m sure we will finally go into winter quarters soon.”

This tender regard from her suffering friend broke Christiane’s resolve not to cry. “Oh, Tildy, how can you say that? You know the Hessians are just the other side of the Delaware. They are just waiting for the river to freeze then they’ll march over and…,” she faltered. She could not put her worst fears into words. Jakob taken prisoner. Jakob killed. The Rebellion crushed.

“Christiane, God will not desert us. We fight for the rights of every freeman.”

Christiane’s face twisted into a bitter smile. She wanted so much to believe Tildy’s word. “What do the rights of free men mean in this misery? You know the Hessians are living comfortably, quartered in private homes, warm and well fed. Across the river the farmers and merchants are happily enjoying the profits of selling their goods to them for English notes and silver. They won’t even accept the worthless paper money our husbands are paid with.” Out of her pocket, Christiane pulled a few bills of the Continental Army script and tossed them into the fire.

Tildy’s hand gripped Christiane’s wrist to stop her. “Christiane, our circumstances are terrible. We can’t fool ourselves. But what we are fighting for is worth all this. It is.” She shook Christiane’ hand to emphasize her point.

Since Christiane had never confided to Tildy her doubts about this Revolution, she pressed her lips together to keep herself from letting her boiling resentment gush out. “How can you say that? We’re doomed–”

“No! Let me explain!”

Christiane could see that Tildy’s eyes burned, not with passion alone, but with fever. Quickly Christiane switched moods. Murmuring soft concern, Christiane began to chafe Tildy’s hand and then refilled Tildy’s mug with hot water from the kettle, steaming in the midst of the fire. How could she have let herself upset Tildy–when the woman was nearly dead?

“Let me explain, Christiane.” Tildy said, her eyes nearly closed. “When Michael and I still lived in Boston in our own home, we quartered a British soldier for a time–”

“You did?” Christiane arranged the blankets around Tildy’s thin shoulders and reached for another short log for the fire.

Tildy’s smile twisted wryly. “Yes, it is the king’s right, don’t you know? Michael could have been jailed or our property confiscated for refusing. They marched them through the streets and stopped at each house. The English officer walked right in, looked over the house as though he owned it, and assigned one soldier to us.” Tildy’s tone was hard as she recalled this slight. “As we got to know Dan, I really understood for the first time what all Michael’s political meetings had been about.”

“How?”

“It was difficult, having been born and raised near Boston, to understand how he thought about things. We had gentry in Boston and they had influence, of course, but their lives very rarely touched ours. Besides, a rich man only had one vote at town council, just like a poor man. But when Dan told us how he was conscripted, it made me see the power of the king.”

The tent flapped wildly in a gust of wind. Christiane tried to shield Tildy from it with her own body. Tildy began to cough and Christiane helped her sip the warm water. Finally the coughing fit ended. Again Christiane urged her not to speak, but she went on, “They send conscripting gangs through London and drag away the young men. What I could not believe was his not resenting his treatment!” To stave off another fit, Tildy swallowed a deep draught from her cup.

“We tried to explain that it was against his rights as a freeman to be treated that way and he said what we called freedom was rebellion. It frightened me.” Tildy’s voice was fading, but her eyes were burning.

“Don’t try to talk anymore. Lay back. You need to rest.”

Tildy shook her head stubbornly. “In twenty years would such gangs rove through the streets here? Would the king drag my sons away to fight a foreign war?” Her head shaking uncontrollably, Tildy looked Christiane straight in the eye. “Or maybe your son.”

Nodding, Christiane urged Tildy to lie back. When Tildy closed her eyes, Christiane pressed her hand to her friend’s forehead. She thought back to Jakob’s reason for leaving his home. Her childhood in France had been so removed from these things, so sheltered.

And then a scene from the past snapped into her mind with sudden clarity. It had taken place only shortly before her mother’s death. Christiane and her mother had been sitting in the library. Her grandmother had stood over her. For over an hour, the older women had rehearsed Christiane over and over on the ranks of nobility–who outranked whom from the bottom fringe of society upward to the king. Christiane had listened carefully and repeated the information to her grandmother’s exacting standard. But evidently her own lack of enthusiasm had finally stung the older woman. “Don’t you understand, child, the importance of this?”

Christiane had sent an appealing look to her mother. “Christiane, grandmere is right. This is of the utmost importance.”

“But why?” Christiane has asked.

“Why!” the elder had fumed. “Don’t you understand, we are talking of rank and rank is power? You must know which men are too powerful to disappoint–to refuse! Don’t you realize that one serious affront, one insult, could destroy everything three generations have built? Are you simple-minded?”

At the time as the woman’s voice had risen insistently, Christiane had trembled with a vague fear. She had not understood completely then, but she grasped it now. Just now she had believed herself to have been sheltered in the past by her family, but now she realized that–in the end–her life as a Pelletier would have taken her to the very seat of power–the French Court. And she would have spent her days carefully treading a tight-rope of pleasing those in power in order not only to prosper, but to survive. She shivered and it wasn’t from the cold.

“You’re right, Tildy,” Christiane said soothingly. “It’s time you rested now.” She took the empty mug from Tildy’s hand and tucked the nearest blanket up over her friend’s chin. After nodding, almost immediately Tildy fell into exhausted sleep.

#

Christmas dawned. Christiane was barely aware that it was her birthday. She and the women around her all sensed that some movement of the army had taken place. Their eyes would not meet each other’s. Most sat sullenly by their fires. They waited in gnawing ignorance. They heard cannon fire across the river in Trenton and they all tensed.

Then late that day Jakob himself burst upon them with the news. “Christiane! Christiane!” he shouted. “We win! We win!” He pulled her into his arms and danced her around the fire. “They don’t even see us coming, Liebschein. It is wunderbar! The general is a genius! He make them look the fools they are!”

“What, Jakob? What are you talking about?” Christiane asked breathlessly, catching his excitement.

“We take back Trenton from those lousy Hessians!” he yelled. “We rub their noses in it. Their own colonel is killed. We show them we are not licked yet!” And then he began dancing her around again and kissing her.

The camp around them seemed to explode with the excitement. Guns were discharged. Laughter, the first in many days, rang out as did raucous choruses of “Yankee Doodle”. Husbands, fathers, brothers filtered in to join the celebration.

Christiane had never experienced anything like it before in her life. It was mass hilarity. The invisible, but normally impregnable line between the decent women and the strumpets disappeared for the evening as everyone joined together in the first real victory in months. The general had done the impossible! He had shown those uppity foreigners what Americans were made of!

The captured rum and food warmed and filled them. The laughter and song fed their weary souls. Finally the party quieted. Now a full eighteen years old, Christiane snuggled contentedly in Jakob’s arms as he slept the sleep of the truly tired. Oh, she loved this man! Somehow they would win this Revolution!

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Author Merrillee Whren & Hometown Dad

booksbylyncote.com Posted on February 10, 2011 by Lyn CoteFebruary 5, 2011

My guest today is a Love Inspired Author Merrillee Whren who shares about her book, Hometown Dad, and her own family.  Here’s Merrilee:

“During February, the third book in my Kellerville series, HOMETOWN DAD, is available in stores. This book is particularly close to my heart. I wrote the story to further awareness of Crohn’s disease because my daughter has it. She was diagnosed while she was in her twenties, a fairly common occurrence among Crohn’s patients.

Crohn’s patients have some symptoms in common, but it is a disease with a wide variety of symptoms and treatments. What works for one person may not work for someone else. The right treatment is often found through trial and error. My daughter is one of the approximately twenty-five percent of Crohn’s patients who also suffer from joint related pain, much like arthritis, in addition to the digestive problems associated with Crohn’s disease.

Thankfully, her current treatment has brought the disease under control. Since her diagnosis, she has been determined and resilient as she continues to live her life to the fullest. I am blessed to have a daughter who is a strong and vibrant woman, who faces the challenges in her life.

Here is a blurb that tells a little bit about HOMETOWN DAD.

Double Trouble

A pair of rowdy boys would be exhausting for two parents—little wonder single mom Melanie Drake feels overwhelmed. Her sons are her world, but she knows she needs a helping hand to keep them in line. Enter Nathan Keller—respected banker, descendant of the town’s father…and baseball coach. Melanie knows he’s out of her league, but as her sons learn to love Coach Nathan, Melanie starts falling for him, too. With the whole town rooting for happily ever after, it won’t be long before this hometown dad joins their family for good.

Do you know someone who has shown resilience as they have faced a health issue?

That’s a question which many will unfortunately answer yes to. My own daughter struggles with fibromyalgia and chronic migraines. She amazes me with her strength in the face of daily pain.”–Lyn

For more info on Merrillee and her books, drop by www.merrilleewhren.com or

http://www.facebook.com/merrillee.whren

Here is also a link for the Crohn’s and Colitis Foundation.

http://www.ccfa.org/


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Chapter Six Scene 1 La Belle Christiane

booksbylyncote.com Posted on February 9, 2011 by Lyn CoteFebruary 3, 2011

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La Belle Christiane

Copyrigth 2011 by Lyn Cote

All rights reserved

Chapter Six Scene 1

The early December wind whipped the ends of Christiane’s wool scarf as she held Nancy’s reins in one hand and young Michael’s hand in the other. The wooden wheels of the baggage train creaked and groaned and bumped over the bridge which spanned the Delaware River. It was nearly evening, but it had been a dark, glowering day since dawn. Everything–the sky, the water, the people–was gray or dirty white.

“Is this really the last river, Mrs. Kruger?” the boy shouted to be heard.

Christiane could only manage a nod of her head. Yes, thank God, it was the last river. After evacuating Manhattan Island in October, they had ferried across the Hudson. Then after the Battle at White Plains, they had crossed the Hackensack, Passaic, and now finally the Delaware. Tonight they would tent in Pennsylvania.

This forced march had begun with Howe’s attack at Throg’s Neck on Manhattan. General Washington had ordered the families and most troops moved off the island, so he wouldn’t be cut off by the British general’s brother, Admiral “Black Dick” Howe, who controlled the waters, surrounding Manhattan. Then Fort Washington on the Manhattan fell to the British–three thousand Americans taken prisoner.

Now what was left of the Continental Army hurried behind them. An army running for its life! Hadn’t she warned Jakob that the English kept whatever ever they took?

Finally the wagon directly in front of them, the one Tildy and William were on, was allowed to venture onto the bridge. The quartermaster sergeant motioned Christiane and Michael to follow it. Christiane could see Tildy was white-faced and nearly unconscious. Little William was asleep on her lap and his small weight was holding his mother onto the wagon. An icy needle of fear pierced Christiane again. The jolting of the wagon and the severe weather had taken a toll on Tildy. She could hardly keep down whatever food Christiane could find. Then Tildy succumbed to a fever. Her hacking cough kept them all awake at night. What if Tildy began to miscarry? What if she couldn’t survive this living in tents in the middle of winter?

“Mrs. Kruger, will they burn this one, too? Will they?”

Christiane looked down into Michael’s eyes, the only part of his face that was visible. She nodded once.

“Will we be able to stay and see it this time? I mean close up?”

“No, we will have to keep moving. The soldiers are right behind us. Remember they must all cross the bridge, too. By then we will be far ahead.” She watched his eyebrows pull together. She wished she could say some comforting word, but there was no comfort for any of them.

“I never get any fun.” The child spoke the words, facing away from her. Because of the noise of the wind, wagons, and drums behind them, he probably thought that she wouldn’t hear him. Oh, Michael. Even after days of freezing rain and constant retreat, a boy could still think of fun. A knot clogged her throat and she tried to fight the tears.

She was wearing every shred of clothing she owned, including Jon’s buckskin breeches under her two dresses. She and Tildy had wrapped the boys’ and their own legs with rag strips for extra warmth. She realized by now that she had become infested with lice and fleas. Wasn’t it bad enough to be part of a forced march in the winter without suffering lice and fleas? And Jakob, where are you in the troops behind us?

None of this made sense. She couldn’t remember what it was like to be warm or even dry. Had she ever really slept in a bed–a bed with ruffled, muslin sheets and a pink satin comforter? What kind of life was this?

This phrase suddenly took her back, back to her grandmother’s chateau. “It is the tradition of our family. You are the fourth generation. You will fulfill your birthright!” Christiane could still hear her grandmother’s querulous exclamation when Christiane had faintly questioned her mother and grandmother as they had been musing about her “possibilities. ” Her mother had just laughed and said, “She is but a girl, mother. When she is a woman, she will be glad of our tradition. What a life you will have, my Christiane!” What a life indeed.

She wiped her tears with the back of her hand. Stepping from the bridge to Pennsylvania soil, she stumbled slightly. Nancy shied, but Christiane stopped herself from falling. She felt as though she were walking on stumps not feet.

“Can I ride again?” Michael whined. “My brother doesn’t have to walk all the time.”

Wordlessly Christiane lifted Michael onto Nancy. Oh, when would they be permitted to stop now that they had crossed the final river? Slap, slap–she struck her mittened hands together to make them tingle. A burning sensation on her finger tips warned her of frostbite. Slap. Slap. Then she hugged herself, folding her arms across her breast and tucking each hand under an elbow. In a few weeks on Christmas Day, she would be eighteen years old. Four years since she fled her grandmother and her “possibilites.” Would she be able to endure much more?

Finally all the Americans must have crossed over to Pennsylvania. The sky behind billowing with black, charry smoke made them all witnesses of the destruction of their final connection with New Jersey and New York.

The final connection with her son, Jean Claude. She’d wanted to go to him, but how could she leave Tildy so weak? And Jakob in danger? What if either or both of them fell ill? No, her son was safe and warm with the Richardson’s and she would not take him from that safe haven.

At last the four of them were huddled by a small fire, too numb to speak or move. In this state they did not notice the furtive figure until he spoke to them.”Christiane, Tildy, is that you?”

Christiane surfaced first. “Jakob!” She hurled herself into his outstretched arms.

“Michael?” Tildy implored weakly.

“He and Tom are both well. Michael send me on to help you and the other women of our squad.”

The sight of Jakob oddly drained the last of Christiane’s energy. She began to cry. “Liebschein.” Jakob held her to him and kissed the top of her forehead, the only spot that was not swathed in scarves and rags. Then he turned to young Michael. “You come with me and we get the tent up.”

The women watched him bustle about setting up their camp. He raised the Main’s tent and then converted the Kruger’s tent into a windbreak around the fire. Christiane stood up to put the tea kettle on the three-legged trivet. There would be no tea, just hot water, but that would warm them all.

Then Jakob went about helping any woman he could. His presence and his word that all the men of Main’s squad were alive and unwounded cheered them all. When he finished, he came back and accepted a steaming mug. Christiane had tucked Tildy and the two boys into their tent. Christiane could not resist questioning Jakob though softly. If his news were bad, she did not want to alarm Tildy and the other women nearby. “We have no news, Jakob. What has happened?” She was afraid to ask: what will happen next?

“We retreat to here. We try to keep the redcoats from Philadelphia and the Congress there. If we hold them back long enough, maybe they go into winter quarters.”

“Are we staying here or will we be moving on soon?”

“It depends on the British. If they come, we retreat again. Michael says the general hopes the terrible weather and the Delaware River will stop them.”

Her tears began again. He took her in his arms and kissed her tenderly. “I am so sorry, Christiane. I should have sent you to be with Jean Claude for the winter. As soon as I can, I will take you there. Do you think the Richardsons would keep us for the winter? In the spring I must re-enlist for the next campaign, but maybe they let me work for them till then.”

She nodded against him.

“Good. Then you will be safe when I have to be away again. I do not want you to stay here in this camp ever again. I cannot leave now though. The war is going bad. The general kept us from redcoats, but now he waits to see where the Englisher Howe attacks next. The fighting could start again at any time. I must go now.”

In the dim light from the fire, Christiane rubbed her face against his buckskin jacket. The leather was stiff with the cold. She pressed herself against him, trying the draw his strength into her own defeated heart.

Tilting back her head, he kissed her, the kiss a plea from one tortured heart to another. She clung to him, pouring all her love, her devotion and, yearning into her kiss. He released her lips. She gasped a sob, then his name.  “I love you, Jakob. I love you. Please be careful. Please.”

“I love you, mein Liebschein. Forever. I love you always.” He kissed her again and then tore himself from her.

Clutching her empty arms around her, she sat back down within scorching distance to the fire. Jakob had gathered them enough wood to last the night. In the morning, Michael and William would have to search for more. She nibbled the dry bread. She knew she should save some for morning, but she was so hungry she could not stop herself. Their rations were ever more inconsistent and poorer in quality. If things did not improve soon, she would go back to begging for food as she had on her journey to join Jakob. Inwardly she cringed. Which was worse–begging or starving? If only Jakob could stay here, she would not be so cold and so lonely. A shiver tore through her. How could they winter in tents?

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Author Nancy Mehl & Quiet Strength

booksbylyncote.com Posted on February 8, 2011 by Lyn CoteFebruary 5, 2011

My guest today is Author Nancy Mehl, the Author of the “Curl Up & Dye” mystery series for Barbour Books. Here’s Nancy:

“I’m happy to guest on a blog about strong women. I’ve been fortunate to know several strong women and try to create resilient female characters in my novels. But recently I was made aware of a very special kind of strength. I call it quiet strength. It doesn’t ask for attention and will even slip past you if you don’t know what to look for.

My mother-in-law, Wilma Mehl, recently passed away at the age of 92. I still remember the day she welcomed me into her family. My husband and I married away from our hometown in a small service with only my father and grandmother as witnesses. Wilma never once complained that we hadn’t waited so she could watch us say our vows. Instead, she told me, “I’m just so glad my son married someone like you.”

Quiet strength.

Down through the years, she never interfered in our marriage, never insisted on attention. Instead, she was grateful for whatever time we gave her. Several years after her husband Fred died, she began to have problems living alone. She made the decision to move to a place that could provide the additional care she needed. So she sold her home and took up residence in a retirement community that provided assisted living. My husband once asked her if she’d like to ride over and see the house she’d spent a major part of her life in – the house her husband built with his own hands. “No,” she said. “That’s behind me.” And we never heard another word about it.

Quiet strength.

In the last years before her death, she would always thank us for coming to see her in the nursing home. And she meant it. Not once did she complain if we missed a visit or ask if we could come to see her more often. Surrounded by elderly people who had dementia, who clutched dolls and begged to be taken home, she never complained. And she had the most beautiful smile. In fact, she smiled at a nurse moments before she took her last breath.

Quiet strength.

What gave her the ability to never complain? To never express regret for a difficult time in her life? It was because she was determined, with every fiber of her being, to never be a burden to the family she loved so much. If she ever did express her inner pain, Only one Person heard it. Her precious Lord, Jesus Christ. Then she left her burden with Him.

Quiet strength.

My son is preparing for marriage to a wonderful girl. Besides being mother and son, we’ve also been best friends his whole life. Now I’m going to have to step back and let another woman take first place. It’s a little scary, but I’m not afraid. You see, I have a beautiful light to guide me. Wilma’s example of quiet strength and the example she left me of real love that doesn’t seek its own way.

Thank you, Wilma.

Isaiah 30:15 …in quietness and trust is your strength.

1 Peter 3: 3 & 4  Your beauty should not come from outward adornment, such as elaborate hairstyles and the wearing of gold jewelry or fine clothes.  Rather, it should be that of your inner self, the unfading beauty of a gentle and quiet spirit, which is of great worth in God’s sight. “–Nancy

Thanks for sharing such a beautiful story of a woman who faced life with strength and bravery. You’ve proven that many mother in laws are blessings. If you’d like more information about Nancy and her books, here’s where to go.–Lyn

Nancy’s Web site: www.nancymehl.com

Nancy’s blog: www.nancymehl.blogspot.com

My newest novel, “Blown Away,” is the second book in my “Curl Up and Dye” series. You can find out more about the adventures of Hilde Higgins, hair-stylist to the recently departed at Barbour Books. http://www.barbourbooks.com/product/Blown-Away,6986.aspx?Tab=Books

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Chapter Five Scene 5 La Belle Christiane

booksbylyncote.com Posted on February 7, 2011 by Lyn CoteFebruary 3, 2011

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La Belle Christiane

By Lyn Cote

copyright 2011 by Lyn Cote

All rights reserved.

Chapter Five, Scene 5

A tall man bustled into to the tent. “Laurens,” his voice boomed. Immediately Christiane recognized the General and stood up respectfully. On his part, seeing her there made him glance around as though to make certain he were at the correct tent. Then he looked expectantly to her.

Though somewhat nervous at meeting this august gentleman again, she stepped forward. “Lt. Colonel Laurens was called away just a few minutes ago, General Washington.”

“We’ve met, haven’t we?” he asked, scrutinizing her.

“Yes, General. I am Mrs. Jacob Kruger. We met on one of your inspections.” As he bowed over her hand politely, she curtseyed.

Laurens himself came hurtling into the tent. “General!” he panted.         “And I, you.” The General looked somewhat amused at the young man’s breathlessness. He inclined his head toward Christiane. “I was just getting re-acquainted with Mrs. Kruger.”

Laurens quickly outlined the reason for Christiane’s visit. “Of course, Mrs. Kruger, please sit back down and write your letter,” the General said. “Being separated from your son must be very difficult. How old is the child?”

“Just a year,” she murmured.

“Oh, dear. Well, I hope you two will be reunited soon. Come, Laurens, we will talk outside while Mrs. Kruger writes her letter.” He started away, and then abruptly turned back to her. “Where are your friends?”
“Across the Hudson River in New Jersey, sir.”

“Laurens, don’t post the letter. Have a courier take it over for her today.”

Christiane’s heart leapt. “Oh, General, how can I thank you–”

“No, not a word. The mails are not reliable these days. This way you will be sure it has arrived.” Before she could offer further gratitude, the two men were gone.

Christiane was touched by his concern. What a kind man he was. So busy and yet able to sympathize with her. She became businesslike. She must write the letter and be out of their way. An army depended on them.

18, October 1776

Dear Josiah and Sarah Anne,

I have been reunited with my husband. He was quite saddened over the news of his son’s death. We are in Washington’s camp together and are unable because of his duties to come for Jean Claude. I am comforted by the knowledge that he is in your excellent care. I will send word as soon as I am able.

Yours very truly,

Christiane

P.S. Kiss my son for me.

Quickly she folded, addressed, and sealed the letter with hot wax.

Waves of longing seemed to roll over her as she imagined the feel of her small son in her arms. Forcing down the emotions that threatened to swamp her, she stood up. Just feet away from the tent’s entrance, the General and Laurens were finishing their consultation. Christiane waited until they became aware of her. “General, I have finished,” she addressed him.

“Mrs. Kruger, we’ll see that it goes off within the hour,” he answered with a smile.

“Thank you so–”

“Mrs. Kruger,” the General broke in, “think nothing of it. You are making a great sacrifice for liberty by encouraging your husband to serve his nation. It is the least we can do.”

Christiane could think of no reply, so she curtseyed and left them.

As Jacob and she sat together that evening, she began to tell him about her afternoon visit to Laurens. But before she could really start, Sergeant Main and a stranger came. “Christiane, this man would like to see you,” the sergeant said discreetly.

The stranger drew near her within the small circle of light. “Mrs. Jacob Kruger?” he questioned officiously and loudly.

“Yes.” Christiane cringed inwardly, knowing that every ear was now on her. She stood up to see him better.

“The General sends his compliments, Ma’am. I am the courier that took your letter across the Hudson today. I have your answer here,” his large voice boomed out of his long thin body.

Christiane took the missive from him. She could feel her cheeks warming; once more the surrounding tongues would wag about her. She opened the letter.

“Ma’am, if you have no further requests, I’ll be going,” the courier asked.

“I have nothing more, but please thank the General and Mr. Laurens again for me.”

“Aye, Ma’am.” He saluted and left hurriedly as though heading for his own fire. Sergeant Main left quietly, too.

Christiane forgot everything as she knelt by the fire and read the brief note.

18, October, 1776

Dearest Christiane,

We write in haste as not to delay the courier. Jean Claude is well and happy. We will care for him as long as necessary with gladness. It is our great joy. You are in our thoughts and prayers daily. Give our condolences again to your husband.

With all our love,

Josiah and Sarah Anne                                                                                                                    Richardson

After reading the meager lines over several times, she turned to face Jacob who was staring at her intensely. Without comment she handed him the note. She looked up at his face in the dim light and was surprised to find that there were tears in his eyes. He looked down at her for a long silence and then he shook his head. Mindful of all the ears concentrating on them, she watched him struggle with his pride.

“Christiane,” he said as though drawing a long breath.

“I had to do something about Jean Claude, you understand that don’t you?”

He nodded and motioned her to come with him. Inside the tent he embraced her sadly. They went into their blankets silently. Jacob kissed her forehead and tucked her close to him.

#

The next morning Christiane awoke to the sound of gunfire. At first she sleepily marked it off as target practice somewhere, but when it continued, increased, she realized it must be something more. A small fear ignited in the pit of her stomach. She sat up looking around her. There was no sign of Jacob.

A breathless voice called to her and the tent flap flipped open. Tildy ducked inside. “Christiane! Christiane! Get up! You must come and help me pack up and then I’ll help you. Quickly, girl, up, up!”

Christiane sat up in confusion. “What’s the matter? What’s wrong?”

“Michael and Jacob left early this morning. Jacob didn’t want to wake you. Howe has attacked somewhere. Don’t you hear the guns? The men are being called forward. We women must move out first with the baggage train so we are not caught in the line of fire. Up! Up!”

Christiane scrambled out into a camp changed to bedlam. Women and children were rushing around them. Fear and hurry almost seemed to crackle about their ears. Tildy took Christiane’s hand and pulled her off to the Main’s tent. There the two women rushed about packing a few wooden boxes and dismantling the gypsy home. Then they repeated the actions at the Kruger campsite. Finally Tildy was shepherding them to the baggage wagon train that had appeared nearby. Everywhere women were loading their belongings onto the ox wagons and horse carts. The drivers helped here and there, lifting heavier objects and tying down items to their own satisfaction.

Christiane hung close to Tildy’s skirts, doing as she was told, glad to be directed. Finally all had been packed on the line of wagons and women, clutching their children’s’ hands, tried to find room for themselves on the wagons atop and around the baggage.

A quartermaster sergeant rode down the line, bellowing his orders again and again, “Only pregnant women and small children on the wagons! All able-bodied women and older children must walk!” Grumbling answered him as many women and their charges dismounted.

Christiane stood by, holding Nancy’s bridle. Tildy stayed in her place with William at the back of the nearest wagon, but she pushed Michael, her oldest son, down from beside her. “Christiane, can Michael ride with you?” she asked.

Christiane nodded, but then she protested, “But you’re not–”

“Yes, I am, Christiane. Almost five months along. Michael, if for any reason we become separated, stay with Christiane.”

The lad and Christiane mounted the old mare as the wagon train began to creak away. Christiane kept Nancy walking near the wagon that held her belongings, Tildy, and William.

Too much had happened too quickly. All along Christiane had known that she was living in a military camp, but never had she imagined she would be there to witness its transformation during a battle. Howe had attacked! Memories of the day spent hiding in the woods from the Mohawk raid flooded Christiane, almost sweeping her into hysteria. Frantically she fought her emotions down, but one unbidden thought tugged at her anyway. Was Jacob safe?

So now the war continues. What will happen next?–Lyn

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Chapter Five, Scene 4 La Belle Christiane

booksbylyncote.com Posted on February 4, 2011 by Lyn CoteFebruary 3, 2011

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La Belle Christiane

By Lyn Cote

All rights reserved.

Chapter Five, Scene 4

He turned and to head back to the drill sergeant. “I mean this is no place for a baby. People sicken every day.”

Christiane followed him closely. ” Jakob, I can’t leave him there. He’s my son. I want him with me.” Christiane was near tears now.

He took both her hands in his. “It is hard. I know.  But I think for the little one it is best he stay away. This is no place for women and children. No.”

“But  Jakob–”

He kissed her forehead gently. “Christiane, how could I bear losing your son too?” His voice broke.

She knew then that he was thinking of Jon and to comfort him, she tightened her hold around his chest and buried her face into his coarse homespun shirt. “How long?” she whispered.

“The fighting here will end soon. Then I take you myself. It frightens me that you come all that way, all alone.”

She couldn’t disagree with him. But the ache inside her for Jean Claude was too harsh to repress. She sobbed soundlessly and shivered despite the warmth of his embrace. Then he left.

Unable to rest over this, Christiane decided to turn to Tildy Main. Maybe she would have some ideas of another way to solve this problem.

“Care for a cup of tea?” Tildy asked, sitting on a camp chair by her fire. Christiane smiled and unfolded the camp chair she had brought to sit on. Silence, a companionable one, held while Tildy performed the simple rite of preparing and serving tea. All around them were the buzz of other voices and the sounds of their communal, outdoor life. “Tildy, don’t you ever get tired of this camp?””Yes, we all do, I suspect.” For just a moment the New Englander scrutinized Christiane. “You were born gentry, weren’t you?”

“Why do you say that?” Christiane sipped her steaming tea, trying to mask her surprise.

“Everything about you. The way you speak, walk, your manners, your looks. I saw you the day you met the General. Would any of us have offered him our hand like a lady? No. When I watch you eat beside a campfire, I picture you more at home at a long table with silver and china around you.”

Christiane studied her cup of tea, not knowing what to say.

“So it must be extra difficult for you,” Tildy continued. “I mean this is a terrible way to live for all of us. But if you were raised to expect better, it must be a bitter draught to swallow.”

“This camp is not what I hate most. I want my son.” Christiane stood up; her agitation over Jean Claude goading her to pace back and forth in front of Tildy. “I know he is safer and much better off with the Richardson’s, but I miss him.” She felt tears come to her eyes.

“Do you think it would help you if we could get a message to the Richardson’s some way?”

“Why didn’t I think of that? But I have nothing to write with or on. And where could I post the letter?” Abruptly she froze. An aide de camp was a secretary and she knew one, John Laurens. He could help her.

She almost turned and started off at once. But one glance down reminded her of her appearance. She fingered her dirty, wrinkled skirt that she had worn day and night. She couldn’t let the gentleman see her like this—if she had a choice Without saying a word to Tildy, she turned away toward her own tent.

“Where are you off to?” Tildy called after her.

Christiane went on without pausing. “I’ll need your help!” Quickly she went into the tent and opened her saddlebags. In one side she still had a blue dress a woman at Rupert’s fort had given her. Because it was too good for travel or camp life, she had not worn it, but it would be appropriate for a call on headquarters of the Continental Army itself. For just a second, Christiane quailed at her own boldness. She had only met Laurens twice fleetingly, but there was no one else to turn to.

She shook out the crushed, wrinkled dress, and spread it on her quilt. She remembered seeing Tildy ironing just the day before. She went back to Tildy and in the matter of an hour Christiane stood, transformed, before her friend.                 Christiane’s hair was coiled neatly in a large braid secured at the base of her neck. Tildy had loaned her one of her white, frilled caps to frame her face. The blue dress was so clean, so fresh, so pretty. Christiane beamed at Tildy. Taken by a sudden whimsy, she held her skirt in both hands and did a sashay as though dancing.

“My, you are a pretty one,” Tildy sighed. “It is a treat just to see you.”

Christiane started off without a backward glance. She recalled where the main headquarters were, but she had quite a long walk to reach it. The balminess of the day matched the lifting of her spirits. She hummed softly an old French tune that her mother had often sung to her.

Finally she could see the house the headquarters occupied and a cluster of tents around it. She thought she would first try at the tents and hope that Lt. Colonel Laurens was about his business there.

Not too far from the first tent she was halted by a sentry, “Your business, Ma’am?”

“I’m looking for Lt. Colonel Laurens please,” she answered.

“Private,” he called. A man nearby, dressed in frontier buckskin, sauntered over.

“What your name, Ma’am?”

“Mrs.  Jakob Kruger.”

“Private, go tell Mr. Laurens that Mrs. Kruger is here to see him.”             The man nodded and then ambled away. The first man said, “He will be right back, Ma’am. Mr. Laurens was just over there.” So she and the sentry stood in silence, each looking at distant objects.

Suddenly a glimpse of a red-and-white, not blue-and- white, uniform caught her attention. Two officers: one in a blue-and-white uniform and one in a red-and-white, stood facing two identically dressed officers. Next to them stood a British drummer.

Christiane realized that two must be British officers. What were they doing at the Continental headquarters? While she pondered this, one of the British officers and one of the American officers changed places very formally with much saluting and drums. A brief exchange of words continued outside of her earshot. Once, while the formalities lagged, the English officer who was not speaking glanced idly in her direction. Her heart lurched. Captain Eastham!

Unconsciously she took two steps forward, but then he turned his head back to the proceedings. She caught herself just before she called out. Was it really the captain who’d helped at that fort in Canada? She was sure it was, but, what would she say to him? They were separated now not only by distance, but by a war. He was the English  Jakob was at war with. Besides he probably wouldn’t remember her. A sense of loss, she couldn’t comprehend clutched her. The four officers marched away.

“Why were those English officers here?” she could not stop herself from asking the sentry.

He glanced in the direction she had nodded. “Oh, prisoner exchange, ma’am.”

“I see.” Her heart still pounded erratically, but she forced herself to nod politely.

“Mrs. Kruger, how good to see you again!” Laurens exclaimed beside her. Christiane trembled slightly. She held out her hand to him and he bent over it momentarily as she curtseyed.

“Please allow me to make you comfortable.” He motioned toward the awning over the entrance of a nearby tent where there was a table and two chairs. He seated her and then sat across from her. “Now what may I do for you?”

His politeness had put her at ease and, in spite of her inward commotion caused by seeing the British officer, her words came out smoothly. “Lt. Colonel Laurens, I have a favor to ask of you.”

“Anything at all if it is in my power.” He looked up expectantly.

Christiane traced one of the folds of her skirt pensively. Looking up, she began, “I have an infant son who I have been forced–by circumstances–to leave in the custody of friends.  I hoped to return soon and take charge of him, but I find that I am unable to go to him right now. I would like to get word to them that I am well, but that I will be delayed in returning.”

“Yes?” he coaxed when she paused.

“That is the favor. I have no way of writing a letter.” She blushed, ashamed of admitting her poverty.

“Why I would be happy to write it for you,” Laurens said quickly.

She blushed again at his misunderstanding. “I am afraid I did not make myself clear. I am quite able to write a letter, sir, but I need paper, ink, and a quill. And I have never posted a letter except in France….”

This revelation obviously startled him. He looked at her more closely as though trying to analyze her. “Of course, how foolish of me. And, certainly, I have everything you need.” Evidently upset at having caused her embarrassment, he quickly went to the table and cleared it for her.

Just as he finished laying out all the materials, the private came over, “Lt. Colonel Laurens, you’re wanted.”

Laurens nodded. “Madame, here is all you need. I will be back as soon as possible,” he said as he moved her chair up to the table.

When he was gone, Christiane sat at the desk, staring down at the paper. It had been so long since she had held a pen in her hand, not since that day at the little fort when she had written down the names of eight men who had wanted to marry her. Fleetingly the face of Captain Eastham came up before her again. She was sorry he had come south to join in these hostilities. Consciously she turned her thoughts back to the present. What should she tell the Richardsons?

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booksbylyncote.com Posted on February 3, 2011 by Lyn CoteJanuary 29, 2011

Have you heard of Chapter A Week? This is an email service that sends subscribers the first 1,000 words of two Christian novels every week. I participate every year each time I have a new book coming out.

Is Chapter A Week something you would be interested in? If so, you can find out more on its Facebook page. Here’s the link:

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