Need title help! Please.
Title Search Continues…
I’m trying to come up with a title for my next book in my Northern Shore Intrigue book, the last one in the series, #6. It takes place in Midsummer and I need a good “dangerous” sounding title. Many of you sent me suggestions but some were “lovely” but not “dangerous!” Here are the three I was most struck by:
Treacherous Midsummer
Sinister Midsummer
Ominous Midsummer
So which one do you favor? Please leave a comment and give your vote for your favorite. Again, I will choose a few to gift ebooks to. Thanks!
NORTHERN SHORE INTRIGUE BOOKS 1-5
I know what you mean! Mosquitoes UGH!
But nobody dies!
Actually that is my working title!
How about Menacing Midsummer?
Ominous Midsummer
Ominous Midsummer
Sinister Midsummer
This makes me feel like something horrible is going to happen.
How about apocalyptic midsummer. That tops my 2nd choice Ominous midsummer!
Out of those Treacherous Midsummer is my favorite.
But I also like Perilous Midsummer
And Traitorous Midsummer.
Good luck!
Treacherous Midsummer
Ominous Midsummer because you never know what will hit you and this one works the best
Treatcherous Midsummer
I like Treacherous Midsummer the best out of the three.
Ominous Midsummer
Treacherous Midsummer sounds dangerous to me.
None of those were of interest to me.
I emailed you two Suggestions
I like: Midsummer Eve Nightmare and: Treacherous Midsummer
I don’t particularly care for any of them. How about something like Midsummer Eve Nightmare?
Don’t I get any poetic license??? ‘-)
I don’t like any of them. There might be Treachery at Midsummer, but it’s not Midsummer that’s treacherous or ominous or whatever.
But no one gets murdered! ‘-)
Treacherous would be my pick
I like Ominous Midsummer as it sounds dangerous.
I’m new to your newsletter. I picked Sinister Midsummer. But I really thought A Midsummer Night’s Murder sounded pretty good to me.
I like Treacherous Midsummer of the three to choose from.
Sinister Midsummer
Treacherous Midsummer
I’m actually not fond of any of the choices, but I guess I would pick Treacherous Midsummer. Not sure if these suggestions were already eliminated- Malicious Midsummer, Midsummer Nightmare, Malevolent Midsummer
Treacherous Midsummer (It implies the danger and keeps one hanging there)
Treacherous Midsummer. Sounds awesome together
I like Sinister Midsummer. Not only does it roll of the tongue nicely, but it goes well with the rest of the series titles.
I’m leaning towards Sinister Midsummer. Although Mosquito Midsummer does sound like a horror story to me. 😉
Treacherous Midsummer gets my vote.
Sinister Midsummer has the element of intrigue to it!
Treacherous Midsummer sounds good to me (I struggle to say ominous properly and when there are words that are tricky to say it distracts me)
Ominous Midsummer – pretty much says everything…and gives not much away. Now I want to know what why…etc.
I like Ominous Midsummer because it seems to be a more intriguing and a riveting title for a book.
I like Sinister Midsummer the best.
I Ike Sinister Midsummer for the alliteration.
Treacherous Midsummer sounds better together.
Sinister Midsummer is okay too.
Treacherous Midsummer. Seems to go with the other titles in the series and lends itself to a variety of dangerous situations related to midsummer.
I like Sinister Midsummer because of the s sounds of Sinister and summer just have a dangerous vibe together.
Ominous Midsummer is my first choice followed by Treacherous Midsummer a distant second.
Treacherous Midsummer is my pick!
I like Ominous Midsummer the best. It sounds more mystifying to me.
I like Ominous Midsummer the best. I haven’t seen it used often in titles.
Ominous midsummer
Ominous Midsummer
I like Ominous Midsummer. It makes me think about the suspense of the unexpected or bad thing that is going to happen anytime.
Of the three, I like Treacherous Midsummer. But… (there’s always a but, isn’t there?) the three titles are awkward and a lot more dramatic than the other five books. You have Precarious, Bitter, Uncertain etc which to me indicate an emotion of the heroine. Something more personal… Deceitful, Deceptive, Perilous or something like Midsummer Deceit, Midsummer Peril. I believe the “feel” of a title is very important. This is just my opinion, I will read it regardless of what you call it.
I like “Ominous Midsummer”. Ominous gives the impression something’s going to happen, but what?
Treacherous Midsummer gets my vote!
I like Ominous Midsummer the best.
I like Treacherous Midsummer. You could have fun with writing that one.
My vote goes to Ominous Midsummer
Of those three I like ominous best. I like the two m sounds together. And in saying that I also like Cheryls suggestion in her comment, Menacing Midsummer.
“Ominous Midsummer” There is nothing truly more “dangerous” sounding as “Ominous”
I like Sinister Midsummer 1
I like Treacherous Midsummer
I like Ominous Midsummer. Also from the other comments, I like Perilous Midsummer.
I like Ominous Midsummer
Ominous Midsummer
I prefer Ominous Midsummer…that leads to so many questions about what could be going on and how bad will it become?
I prefer Ominous Midsummer
Sinister Midsummer. I also like Treacherous Midsummer but it’s like a tongue twister when saying it out loud. It would be easier to say Sinister Midsummer when recommending it to a friend to read.
Sinister Midsummer
I like treacherous midsummer
I love treacherous midsummer. You don’t hear that word too often.
i like treacherous midsummer of the three
I like Ominous Midsummer. You can feel the threa, but you don’t know why, or where the threat is coming from.
Ominous Midsummer
But I do like Treacherous Midsummer of the three mentioned.
Menacing Midsummer.
Vicious Midsummer.
(my favorite) Perilous Midsummer